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I. 典型平行结构
1. 比较级结构
1. the higher……, the longer……:The higher watt-hour rating,the longer the battery can be expected to last.(v.形式不一定要一致)
2. X is less/more than Y
2. 习惯用语类
1. not only…… but (also,在该结构表示递进关系时可以省略)……:someone who could not only arrange music for his successful bing band, but also mirror his eccentric writing style in order to finish.(could限制动词结构;not only……but also放在who前后,平行的部分不一样)
1) trap:做题的时候要弄清楚句子的意思是递进还是转折。not only ...but also表示并列,不能表示转折,不要有先入为主的感觉认为not only...but also必须一起出现。单独出现but also是可能的,此时表示的是转折
2) Tips extra for the structure:
a. 就近原则:主谓一致部分
b. 不用在否定句中:They don't fear not only hardship but also death.(可以使用either……or或者neither……nor进行替换)
c. 倒装原则:not only 位于句首时,第一个分句中的主语和谓语要部分倒装
a. e.g.【GWD-8-Q20】Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave【此处应该改为give,因为倒装引起了did提前】 consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.
d. 变体:
a. not only……but(省略also,用在递进结构)
b. not only……also
2. not(as)……but(as)……:Many experts regarded the large increase in credit card borrowing in March not as a sign that households were pressed for cash and forced to borrow, but as a sign that households were confident they could safely handle new debt.(as不能省略,是固定搭配)
3. X is good, and so too is Y(倒装形式)
4. the same to X as to Y:Galileo was convinced that natural phenomena, as manifestations of the laws of physics, would appear the same to someone on the deck of a shop moving smoothly and uniformly through the water as to a person standing on land.
5. both……and……:Elizabeth Barber, the author of both <Prehistoric Textiles>, comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean,and <Women’s Work>, a more general account of early cloth manufacture,is an authority on textiles in ancient societies.(看清楚both……and的并列成分,of在both之前,所以后面的and后没有必要加入of)
6. A as well as B【该结构平行,强调的是A,但注意这个结构在语义上并不对等】:The nineteenth-century chemist Humphrey Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.
i. e.g.【prep08/SC230】Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
a. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won【as well as有主次之分,这样导致了that修饰的仅仅是writer,导致前面became the first woman出现语义错误】
b. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning【in addition to是同样的问题,而且这个地方还有一个first ……to do 】
c. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also【and also一般指的是对于同一个对象的两个描述】 the first Swedish writer to win 【正确选项】
7. X,such as Y/Such X as Y(example:表举例时,用such as 不用like,as可能省略;当GMAT中出现like、unlike时,仅考查其比较用法):most effort to combat such mosquito-borne diseases as malaria and dengue have focused on either vaccinating humans or exterminating mosquitoes with pesticides.(双平行结构)
8. Neither……nor与相似结构:
1. e.g.Neither the salesman nor the supervisor has been notified of the sale.
2. Similar structure:Although energy prices have tripled in the United States over the last two years, research indicates that few people have significantly reduced the amount of driving they do (few已经有了否定含义所以不用再加入一个nor)or (have)made fuel efficiency a priority when shopping for cars.——两个平行的过去分词可以共享同一个助动词have
9. And,but,or, yet:平行标志词为and,but,or,yet的时候从第二个开始be动词,情态动词,不定式可以省略
a. trap:As well as不等同于and,不表示并列关系,而是侧重其前面的部分,后面部分处于从属地位
b. Because moisture exhaled by tourists had raised the humidity within them to such levels that salt from the stone was crystallizing and fungus was growing on the wall.(would crystallize的形式都是不对的)
c. And结构中的从句平行【容易忽略平行关系,从句平行容易忽略修饰关系】
a. 【OG11/SG02】However much United States voters may agree that there is waste in government and that the government as a whole spends beyond its means,it is difficult to find broad support for a movement toward a minimal state. 【这道题的平行考点比较隐蔽,判断主要依据未划线部分的and that来断定是从句平行】
· 该题目中的几个补充:
a) However是连接副词,因此不可以连接两句话(只有and,but在这里可以)
b) However后面可以加句子,但是despite只能加介词
b. 【OG11-SC27】Minnesota is the only one of the contiguous forty-eight states that still has a sizable wolf population, and where this predator remains the archenemy of cable and sheep.
A. that still has a sizable wolf population,and where
B. that still has a sizable wolf population,where
C. that still has a sizable population of wolves,and where
D. where the population of wolves is still sizable;
E. where there is still a sizable population of wolves and where
· 平行的只能是同一种从句,不同种从句不可以(OG:That still has...and where are not parallel),另外从语法上讲如果选C的话第二个从句的where离先行词States也过远了
· 没有必要为了平行而平行,即强行造成两个从句【OG11/SC22】
○ 【题目原文】In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding,party because certain characteristics should be acquired by their steers and partly because crossbreeding is said to provide hybrid vigor.
○ 【划线部分正确答案】partly to acquire certain characteristics in their steers【能用主动就不要用被动,题目中划线部分和正确答案表达一个含义,所以优先选择更加简单的】
d. More and more in recent years, cities are stressing the arts as a means to greater economic development and (are)investing millions of dollars in cultural activities, despite strained municipal budget and fading federal support.(省略的情况)
e. Because the budget package in Congress promises a combination of higher taxes and reduced spending that may slow economic growth, many in the credit markets wonder whether the Federal Reserve will compensate(使用by的原因) and help the economy by keeping interest rates low, or perhaps even by pushing.(through和by的区别在于:通过做B达成了做A倾向使用through,而通过做B来做A【A还在做】时使用by)
10. whereas(while,but:introduces two contrasting situations or events and should be followed by parallel structure ) :whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes from a random pattern.
1. Notice1:whereas 只要求对比的核心逻辑上有对称关系,不要求对称位置必须是对称名词
2. e.g.Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany.
3. Notice 2:如果whereas后面接介词短语,那么主句的开头也必须需要是介词短语(whereas后出现介词短语或者状语都会非常对称),如果whereas后接单纯主谓宾(或主系表),主句也要尽量用单纯的主谓宾(或主系表)来对应
4. e.g.Pine trees thrive in relatively wet climates, whereas oaks prefer drier ones.【单纯主谓宾结构】
5. e.g.Whereas owners of condominium apartments have free and clear title to their dwellings, owners of cooperative apartments have shares in a corporation that owns a building and leases apartments to them.【介宾结构】
3. 标点符号类
A. 逗号:
a. 通常逗号形式:A and B/A,B and C/A,B,C and D(逗号只能出现在最后一个元素前面且不可以省略)
b. 特殊逗号形式:连接两个从句,逗号可有可无。如果连接两个元素是长的独立句子时候,GMAT推荐使用“A, and B”形式
· The National Academy of Sciences has urged the nation to revamp computer security procedures,institute new emergency response teams, and create a special nongovernment organization to take charge of computer security planning.(本题省略了不定式to)
B. 分号:分号前后必须使用完整的主谓结构,它不能连接句子和短语(即句子;短语;句子)
1. e.g Tropical bats play important roles in the rain forest ecosystem,aiding in the dispersal of cashew,data, and fig seeds;pollinating banana,breadfruit,and mango trees;and indirectly helping to produce tequila by pollinating agave plants.(此处分号起的作用是平行三个并列短语)
C. 破折号:起到解释说明作用
· e.g.【Prep08/SC235】A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A. Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B. Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C. a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D. a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E. a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
· Analyse:
1. 这个题目就非常讲求平行结构,首先从逻辑上对比的是书而不是作者,因此A,C,D就都不对。在B和E中,要优选E因为,前面给出的形式是Jean Toomer’s Cane
2. being+n.不一定错。本题破折号后可以还原为句子:The others are RW’s NS and RE’s IM.
3. 关于用Black Americans还是用a Black American:日常写作中用Black Americans和a Black American都可以,逻辑和语法都没有问题,GMAT家似乎倾向于使用后者,更加清晰指出一本书是一个人写。
4. 逻辑平行:平行结构最终考察的还是逻辑关系,因此要先满足逻辑关系才考虑形式平行
A. 系动词:系动词两边的成份要并列
a. 系动词当成平行标志词,主语和宾语平行(meaning上也是)
b. be动词中,当使用进行时与被动语态时不要求平行
c. e.g.The bouquet of flower was a gift of love.
d. e.g.Once(后面接过去完成时) they had seen the report from the medical examiner, the investigators had no doubt(doubt可以做动词doubt whether也可以做名词 have not doubt that)that the body recovered from the river was that of the man who had attempted to escape from the state prison.(body和man不对等)
B. 系动词类:be动词+become+感官动词+appear+grow+stay+seem+turn+resemble+represent+remain
C. Sentence structure的平行:行为1导致行为2也是一种大平行
A. e.g.【Prep08/SC255】Being heavily committed(此处不使用A项中的commitment是因为committed和后面的miss and misinterpret对应) to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
D. 【逻辑平行但形式不平行的典型例题,OG11-SC99】 Judge Bonham denied a motion to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to a hotel.
(A) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of to confine them to
(B) that would have allowed members of the jury to go home at the end of each day instead of confined to
(C) under which members of the jury are allowed to go home at the end of each day instead of confining them in
(D) that would allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than confinement in
(E) to allow members of the jury to go home at the end of each day rather than (to)be confined to
· 本题看到平行标志词instead of和rather than即可确定考察平行关系,所以根据此项原则B,C,D全部排除。剩下A和E,此项必须根据逻辑语义进行判断。题目应该是说judge否认他想让陪审团成员每天回家而非强迫他们留在酒店。留在酒店是被动的,所以E更符合语境而A是主动态所以选E
E. 【在两种情况下都满足形式平行条件,最终和谁平行需要考虑语义】Professor Dan Ariely and Kalvin Martin have collaborated on petitions urging school to offer an unqualified apology for any abuse, to authorize an independent investigation, and to provide a fund to compensate victims for therapy and for other expenses or losses resulting from the abuse.
A. Urging school to offer an unqualified apology for any abuse, to authorize an independent investigation, and to provide a fund to compensate victims for therapy and for
B. Urging schools to offer an unqualified apology for any abuse, authorizing an independent investigation, and providing a fund to compensate victims for therapy and for
· 逻辑上应该是school进行offer, authorize, provide三个动作而非请愿书petitions,所以应选A
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