GWD1-23,请教D为什么错？

fishrain

Q23:

Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning down individual trees but do not denude the forest.

which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning

which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn

which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn

removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning

removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn

mydream1977

用进行时替代定语从句,需要注意时态的变化,如果是同时发生的,则可以提到,如果不是,就不能替代.显然, burn这个动作是发生在tally之前的,所以D错.

sandiegotj

surface fires that burn but do not denude the forest平行

而burning和 do not denude就不可以了

Dannie

我倒觉得在这道题里面逻辑的问题应该优于平行来考虑。

D的removing和burning不能有效地代替定语从句，因为分词在形式上表现的逻辑是与address同时发生，即这两个动作的逻辑主语是work，而非应该修饰的logging和fires. 这个问题似乎比仅仅看动作是否同时发生，或者句子结构是否平行更重要。