【求助】straw man fallacy到底是什么错误？

littlewoman

原文如下（在800scoreAWA中）：

6. Straw Man

Here the speaker attributes an argument to an opponent that does not represent the

opponent's true position. For instance, a political candidate might charge that his opponent "wants

to let all prisoners go free," when in fact his opponent simply favors a highly limited furlough

system. The person is portrayed as someone that they are not.



In my comprehension, it means 夸大其词。Is it right?

Can anybody explain it for me?我好像不能很准确的理解这种错误的含义。

另外有没有人在范文224中发现犯了这个错误的题目，如果有一定要通知小的，小的不胜感激

littlewoman

up！在线等。。。

judydongxueni

straw man 就是假想的对手的意思。这种错误就是说作者把别人的论点理解错了。却把这个错误的假想的论点拿来进行批驳。一方面就象楼主说的可能是他夸大了对方的论点同样地也可能是别的方面的错误理解。

        我看的题目比较少，暂时没有看到。你等等看有哪位NN给你找个例子。

         

judydongxueni

个人认为七宗罪就够用了。这些逻辑错误可以占到很大比重，而且可以套用模版。剩下的错误只要对特定的题目能找的出来就可以了，不用费神去总结。

littlewoman

谢谢 judydongxueni mm
我也正在总结七宗罪，不过看到范文中7宗罪的句式就那么几种，换来换去就几句话。即便不直接引用原模板上的，还是担心太陈旧了，考试时用上去怕拿不到好分数哦
大家怎么看？

judydongxueni

About the e-rater
If your essay better resembles the stored"6" essays in the e-rater's database, you will get that score. That is why that is so important to read the 20 sample essays we have. The e-rater can not detect certain things, such as humour, spelling errors or grammer. It analyzes structure through using transitional phrases, paragraph changes, etc. It evaluates content through comparing your score to that of the other students. The e-rater does, however, detext spelling and grammar indirectly. If your transition phrases and logical indentifers are not properly spelled the e-rater will not detect them. Since the e-rater uses the presence of such transitional phrases as an indicator of effective writting, you are indirectly penalized if they are not spelle correctly.
Fooling the e-rater
1Make your essay highly rigid in structure. Make it look, in its organization, like other 5 and 6 essays.
2Clearly demarcate sections using phrases such as "for example", "therefore", etc..
3Use qualifiers judiciously. The e-rater will accociate careful use of qualifiers with high scorers.
4Use the exact the terminologh we do in the usual suspects section to identify logical reasoning flaws in the argument section.
5Don't use unuaual references that no other business school student would use. The e-rater uses other scorers as a template based on how well you resemble other scorers.
6Don't avoid or overuse qualifiers such as "likely", "should", etc..(link to qualifiers). Smart people use qualifiers, which means the high scorers in the e-rater's database will be filled with essays saturated with qualifiers. However, do not overuse qualifiers or it will dilute your esssay.
7your essay should be written in "american" not "english".
这个是800SCORE里的话，所以我觉得不用担心陈旧拉！

呵呵真的是在线等哦

littlewoman

谢谢judy mm

本来是在线等的，后来发现有时差，我发帖子的时候人太少。。呵呵

现在我放心了。
发现看范文224篇还是挺花时间的，比想像中要慢