TWE018！第一次发文章。。谢谢。。大家尽量打击！

加油加油

本人属于超级菜啊~~大家帮一下忙，拉一把。。估计现在水平还在3~~哎着急。。还有28天。。天天写一两篇。。

Obviously, supervisors in different positions need different capacities. However, there are several qualities that all good supervisors have in common. These conspicuous aspects are listed as follows.

In the first place, teamwork is the most important part. Because teamwork will ensure working efficiency definitely. An excellent boss should have the ability to lead a working group to overcome every difficulty encountered in work no matter how tough it is.

secondly,treating fairly to employees is also very crucial for one to be a good boss. A supervisor should evaluate employees’ behavior correctly based on a set of reasonable criteria, then delegate different authorities to different employees according to what each employee is adept at. By this means, the advantage of each employee will be performed perfectly. And it will help everyone work more efficiently.

Coming to the wider level. A good supervisor should also have a kind heart that is eager to success. If one person has got a clear aim, he (she) will get endless energy to work for it no matter how hard it will be. In addition, the eagerness to success also helps the supervisor set up a good impression to the whole company. In fact .a good supervisor should set the standard for the employees by his (her) own behavior. That is to say, a good supervisor should be the positive role model for the employees. This can promote the morale among the workers which is of great benefit to the company.

Nevertheless, there are still more details to consider more carefully about how to be a good supervisor .For instance, the specific education, keen insight and so on. But overall, i reckon these three fundamantal aspects can never be lacked as a excellent supervisor..

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-4-17 16:28:33编辑过]

brace

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=68&ID=63945&page=1

请修改一下标题，谢谢。

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-4-17 7:54:48编辑过]

加油加油

抱歉没有遵守规则啊~~改马上就改！！谢谢各位了！！

brace

以下是引用加油加油在2005-4-16 13:01:00的发言：

本人属于超级菜啊~~大家帮一下忙，拉一把。。估计现在水平还在3~~哎着急。。还有28天。。天天写一两篇。。

Obviously, supervisors in different positions need different capacities. However, there are several qualities that all good supervisors have in common. These conspicuous aspects are listed as follows.

In the first place, teamwork is the most important part. Because teamwork will ensure working efficiency definitely. An excellent boss should have the ability to lead a working group to overcome every difficulty encountered in work no matter how tough it is.

secondly,treating fairly to employees is also very crucial for one to be a good boss. A supervisor should evaluate employees’ behavior correctly based on a set of reasonable criteria, then delegate different authorities to different employees according to what each employee is adept at. By this means, the advantage of each employee will be performed perfectly. And it will help everyone work more efficiently.

Coming to the wider level. A good supervisor should also have a kind heart that is eager to success. If one person has got a clear aim, he (she) will get endless energy to work for it no matter how hard it will be. In addition, the eagerness to success also helps the supervisor set up a good impression to the whole company. In fact .a good supervisor should set the standard for the employees by his (her) own behavior. That is to say, a good supervisor should be the positive role model for the employees. This can promote the morale among the workers which is of great benefit to the company.

Nevertheless, there are still more details to consider more carefully about how to be a good supervisor .For instance, the specific education, keen insight and so on. But overall, i reckon these three fundamantal aspects can never be lacked as a excellent supervisor..

Personally I think it is no more than 3.5 score.

1. You need to read more good articles. You can search Jinghua.

2. You can modify it by yourself first.

3. Keep a better structure.

happytoni

语法存在比较大的问题，要主义每个词的词性。。。

可以先从简单句写起。多看看精华文章，也可以适当看看模板，

论证不够充分，

还需要主义TOEFL作文的基本模式。。。