补充6-13，头大！！

pyndick

13. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations,
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
除了d,其他的我都能接受：（
这个考什么啊？帮帮忙了

八戒

八戒试一下：

答案是不是C呀！（我也记不清楚拉，如果错了，还请指正，且谈一下我的看法）

A、carefully coordinating them with her narratives,就近修饰产生逻辑混乱！

B、carefully coordinating them with her narratives，还是修饰对象有问题

E、carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
     本来是从属，现在变成了并列！

amigo

The answer is C.

1stzhang

这个题目我是这样解题的，希望可以帮助你
（1）分词只能放在开头和结尾，绝对不可以放中间，排除前两个答案；
（2）比较c/d,没有并列从动词入手，coordinated with 从逻辑意思上来说是illustrations和her narratives组合，而不是Beatrix Potter和her narratives组合。其实这是考动词的合理发出
（3）比较c/e，e违反一个常用的句法规则－修饰全句的状语一般放在句首或句尾，但是e最严重的错误是破坏了句子逻辑意思的合理性，但是这个有时不敢让我们下决心放弃答案

joywzy

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and


为什么错啊？如何判断？能不能讲讲，谢谢。

A，B，D都是修饰错误。

1stzhang

我在上面已经说了：e违反一个常用的句法规则－修饰全句的状语一般放在句首或句尾

pyndick

以下是引用1stzhang在2003-8-7 23:23:00的发言：
这个题目我是这样解题的，希望可以帮助你
（1）分词只能放在开头和结尾，绝对不可以放中间，排除前两个答案；
（2）比较c/d,没有并列从动词入手，coordinated with 从逻辑意思上来说是illustrations和her narratives组合，而不是Beatrix Potter和her narratives组合。其实这是考动词的合理发出
（3）比较c/e，e违反一个常用的句法规则－修饰全句的状语一般放在句首或句尾，但是e最严重的错误是破坏了句子逻辑意思的合理性，但是这个有时不敢让我们下决心放弃答案

第一条有依据吗？就是说不能放在主语和谓语中间？
第三条，呵呵，真的不敢让我下决心
非常谢谢你的点评A+

1stzhang

有根据！你放心使用

carefield

该句主要在考介词的位置, 即修饰;
A. D. E 的in her book illustrations 修饰歧义, 可能是说BEATRIX 这个人, 也可能是状语.
C放在句首避免了这一问题.

B, 的VING 可能修饰前面的 ILLUSTRATIONS, 可能修饰后面 人.

midnight

以下是引用1stzhang在2003-8-8 21:55:00的发言：
有根据！你放心使用

Check this one:

The growth of the railroads lead to the abolition of local times,which was determined by when the sun reached the observer's meridian and differing from city to city,and to to the establishment of regional times.
A which was determined by when the sun reached the observer's meridian and differing
B which was determined by when the sun reached the observer's meridian and which differed
C which were determined by when the sun reached the observer's merdian and differing
D determined by when the sun reached the observer's merdian and differed
E determined by when the sun reached the observer's merdian and differing

另，ＬＺＭ　１１１页说到＂现在分词表示伴随方式或情况，一般放在句末，有时也放在句首或句中＂．所以不能绝对说分词不能放在句中．