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幸运过关,TWE满分心得与机笔考对比

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发表于 2005-3-31 08:20:00 | 只看该作者
Could you send your twe model to my emailbox? Thanks and take a good rest.
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发表于 2005-3-31 08:24:00 | 只看该作者

caqmp: congratulations!

I will take toefl in exact one month. Could you send your twe model to my emailbox (yangqiong69(A) hotmail.com). Thank you so much. I wish I had the same luck as you.

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-31 12:15:00 | 只看该作者

应大家要求,我把模版送上,不过2,3,4段跟REDPASSION是一样的,不正之处望指教~!

In a modern society, people always face the dilemma to choose whether A or B. Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concerned, some people hold the opinion that A while others claim that B. Yet that does not mean they are of the same to me. To be frank, I would prefer A if personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important now than the one that (reason 1). History witnesses and presents many examples as below: …… Dont you think these examples quoted above are very persuasive?

(reason 2) is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view. …… If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Superior as A is, however, A or B  also has own demerits, too. …… Nevertheless, the advantages of A carry more weight than that of disadvantage of A, so the most striking conclusion is obvious.

To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an whole and thus organic become more persuasive, we can safely come to the conclusion that choosing A is rather wise decision.(如果时间不够下面可以不写,我就没写)But I have not denied the opinion that choosing B. I must admit that people can do well without A, but no one can ignore the added convenience and satisfaction offered by A./such experience will definitely be helpful in one's later life. 可选(In fact, not only do I prefer to A, but also prefer to 一个建议 as ### as possible.)  

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发表于 2005-3-31 18:49:00 | 只看该作者

哇,太好了 , 正在发愁作文呢 还没来得及练习

不过觉得很多时候不是考题里没有明显说A or B 阿, 反正就是勉强算是提到了2个观点, 这样也能套魔板不成?

还有,搂住说的1+3+1结构能不能说具体点啊? 谢谢谢

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发表于 2005-3-31 18:53:00 | 只看该作者
就是那个3 是什么意思呢? 3 个理由还是 2个理由加一个however啥的
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发表于 2005-3-31 21:17:00 | 只看该作者

恭喜拉


可不可以告诉我你得作文题目是什么?


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发表于 2005-4-1 11:31:00 | 只看该作者
我要选笔考作文。。。 打击很大。。。怕怕
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发表于 2005-4-2 06:56:00 | 只看该作者
他的作文题目是:影响人类20世纪的一项发明。说实话,这个题目也能套到这个模板上。
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发表于 2005-4-2 08:25:00 | 只看该作者

模版模版。。。。急需。。。谢拉。

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发表于 2005-4-2 09:57:00 | 只看该作者
楼主的模板的确很好,潜词造句很考究,没有一般的功底是写不出的。个人认为写作基础不好的不要用,否则考官会一眼看出。这就是有些人用模板而得分低的原因。
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