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joanrain

119. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.

Do people behave differently when they wear different clothes? Some people believe so while others do not. As far as I am concerned, I think it is true.

First of all, almost everyone has different "faces" to meet the demand of the society. One of my friends, who is a manager in a big company, appears to be very serious in her office. However, when she dates with her boyfriend in her spare time, she will choose to wear her lovely skirts instead of official dress and smile sweetly. In fact, her colleagues can hardly recognize her when meeting her in the street. And she does appear to be very lazy in her sleeping dress, she told me that she was relaxed a lot after changing her clothes at home.

In addition, different clothes may affect people's mood to some extent. As for me, if I have worn a jeans jacket, I always feel excited and want to play some sports games. But I can hardly imagine what will happen if I act like an energetic boy when I dress in a princess's style.

Admittedly, Rose is always Rose no matter what she wears, and her characters will never change just because she changes her clothes. But no one can deny that people acts differently when they are in different clothes. This modern society requires us to have a double-face, which means we must appear differently in facing different things and people. On the one hand, we choose clothes according to our mood or special conditions; on the other hand, clothes influence our behavior in return.

So, to sum up, I agree with that people behave differently when they wear different clothes.

也是卡时间写的，可能有些牵强附会，因为我都是随机选的题目然后在30分钟内边构思边写的，请多多提意见啊！～～谢谢啦～～～

beautywawa

1.建議樓主第一段首句,最好不要用問句,只需強烈表達清楚自己的意思就可以了

2.第二段可再增加

3.末段,希望樓主在增進一下模版.

joanrain

啊，写到最后的时候我没时间了，就草草结了个尾

谢谢我再重新修改一下

The issue of whether people behave differently when they dress different clothes is a controversial and complex one. Some people think it is ridiculous to say that people act differently just because of their clothes, while others believe there is a strong tie between people's behavior and clothes. As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. My reasons are as following.

First of all, people choose different clothes according to their job, mood, etc. Nowadays, almost everyone has different "faces" to meet the demand of the society. One of my friends, who is a manager in a big company, appears to be very serious in her office. However, when she dates with her boyfriend in her spare time, she always chooses to wear her lovely skirts instead of uniforms and smile sweetly. In fact, her colleagues can hardly recognize her when meeting her in the street. And she does appear to be very lazy in her sleeping dress, she told me that she was relaxed a lot after changing her clothes at home.

In addition, different clothes may affect people's mood to some extent. As for me, if I have worn a jeans jacket, I always feel excited and want to play some sports games. But I will never act like an energetic boy when I dress in a princess's style. Due to the high pressure people bear in their career, some psychologists even suggest people to change their dressing style in order to live more happily.

Admittedly, Rose is always Rose no matter what she wears, and her characters will never change just because she changes her clothes. But no one can deny that people acts differently when they are in different clothes. This modern society requires us to have a double-face, which means we must appear differently in facing different things and people. For example, we wear as decent office ladies and act gracefully in our offices, but undoubtedly we will put on the apron while we are cooking in the kithchen.

So, from what I have discussed, I surely agree to the statement that people behave differently in different clothes. On the one hand, we choose clothes according to our mood or special conditions; on the other hand, clothes influence our behavior in return.

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-3-2 11:35:07编辑过]

joanrain

55，为什么没有人再提些意见啊，还有修改后的估计能得几分啊

brace

TWE001 试写，请多指教

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joanrain

我看过啦，她文笔很流畅，不像我是挤牙膏……唉