请大家帮忙分析下这题语法~

hemodata

牛掰 发表于 2013-5-15 11:08
你好~
为什么不能选择E呀？我看解释上多从语义上分析的，看了半天，没有琢磨清楚语义有什么不对~应该是v. ...

看这个帖子倒数第二楼
关于,including的用法有别于其他，ving的用法部分

我觉得应该是对的

或者，这里avik.ch的发言，第一页的倒数第4楼，和那个贴子的最后一楼
他主要引用的是ron的解释，也应该是对的
http://www.beatthegmat.com/sculpted-boulders-found-at-lepenski-t113605.html

关于including的用法
1. It modifies the preceding noun. ( it looks like a comm+ing modifier, but it did not work in this way)
John scored 100 marks in his most recent exam, bringing his average to 95%. - It modifies the whole clause.
The Natural Fitness Test consists mostly of body exercise program, including sit-ups, X….

2.It should give a list of some, but not all, of that noun.

The Gym teacher asked us to do three body exercise, including X,Y and Z.( this is wrong, as all are mentioned)
The Gym teacher asked us to do ten body exercise, including X,Y and Z ( this is Ok)

Please note : These all are Ron's example.

hemodata

Jerry2nd 发表于 2013-8-5 20:51
我还是不太理解，能不能具体一点。我觉得including在这里一点歧义都没有，这道题虽然选了B，但无法说服自 ...

“，+including”只用于修饰逗号前面那个名词

including的用法类似介词，有别于其他ving结构，不能用于修饰前面的句子

而且，正确选项中，中间部分是同位语，用于补充说明。句子的重心事再说SB这个东西包含的有什么什么和其他地方已发现物品相似之处。如果选择E，句子变成了说明SB是一个什么东西，补充说明了它和别处的有什么相似性。通常来讲，正确选项不会显著的改变原句重心，除非原句本身表达问题很大。

hemodata

Jerry2nd 发表于 2013-8-5 21:40
对哦！通过重心秒选哈哈，谢谢高人指点。

还有再想问下，including区别与其他v+ing这种词的话。那includ ...

首先，我觉得对于我们一般人来讲
语义只能是辅助的，除非专项突破之后

我搜索了og/prep全部正确句子里面的including，你确认下用法有没有除了刚才我说到的这种呢？
我暂时没时间看了，你研究了回复一下昂

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