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Should we humans act on our own accord instead of seek guidance from role models? With respect to sole imitation and pending on others to decide, I think the author makes a plausible remark. However, the statement emphasizes individualism, claiming the distinction or even discordance between one's own option and that advised from other great people, which I fail to agree upon.
There is indeed evidence that role models can sometimes impede individual development, rendering them more dependent on historical figures, social celebrities, and spiritual leaders. Parents send their kids to the school which a eminent talent used to attend. Investors flooded into future and forwards market, betting on certain brokers and virtually copying their orders. And even in more important and formative events such as marriage, people expect their future lovers to possess the attributes that role models own. Wedding celebration ? No the doubt the most recent style! It's true that celebrities and illuminaries may guide how to behave in an ethical way, yet they are never obligated to lead people step by step, otherwise they are not humans, but superrea l beings instead. And in events based on individual predilections and likes, the borrowing experience from others simply dampen the initial meaning of events themselves.
To further my argument, it's indispensible that we draw a line between imitating and learning. Copying general can be categorized to newborn behaviors. During nascent phase, youngsters imitate adults' accent and movements. Involved in the process are natural and intuitive response free of logical thinking---- which later pervades into kids' life.
Learning, on the other hand, furthers the imitation through rational understanding. This ability partly evolves out of human inborn gift, and partly stems from education, both at home and in school. Combined with recalling former experience and imitating, learning better enables people to act on their own accord.
From my observation, while we are not supposed to copy others, we are still bound to learn from our family, coworkers, and leaders. Without it, Soppocrates would not have founded the theory that first attributed sickness to natural forces instead of supernatural ones. In fact, even large enterprises adopt learning process. Consider Facebook, is there no semblance that reminds you of Myspace? And after the surged market price after the company's initial public offering, Linkedin and twitter have also enforced the procedure on hand. Indeed, they are not simply copying, but rooted their own's companies' rationale and culture, injecting innovation at times.
To sum up, people are born with the ability to imitate, yet they're not supposed to abuse this gift at the expense of loosing their own profile. Yet learning, the process that involves critical thinking and logical analyzing, should be recommended to all, for it encourages innovation while retaining the merits.
-- by 会员 winewineno1 (2011/10/24 23:46:45)
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