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请大家帮忙看看我的作文。。。^_^

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楼主
发表于 2007-8-23 22:47:00 | 只看该作者

请大家帮忙看看我的作文。。。^_^

Do you agree or disagree: People can learn more from watching television than reading books.

 

 

Watching TV has never appealed to me . Imagine a man who watch TV for his whole life .What will happen ? Will him obtain the knowledge that how to make a living with specific skills ? Will him learn from the TV set about what the true meaning of life while he is falling  in love with the beautiful actresses Will he be active toward the life with a large amount of friends? I don’t think so .

 

To begin with , TV programmes may not show you the exactly approaches to earn for a living . But books do . The various books like educationed friends . When you get on with them , they will tell you the knowledge that you are interested in . Apart from what you gained in school , an additional technique may be mastered through reading the books of the specific subject . When I am still a sophomore , I learned French by myself , and passed the TEF test a year later , all by hitting the books , instead of watching television.

 

Moreover , one of the most obvioius benefics of watching television is that TV programmes  can stimulate their desire to experience the real meaning of love or w the feeling of expressing their violent tendency ,rather than face with the reality . My little cousins serves as one of the victims . He was addicted to the violent movies and always imagine himself as a killer .

 

I can imagine some opposing voices . And we must point out that TV sets can release our press from work and study , and it acts as a sourse of happiness . But it is the television that apart  ourselves from out friends and relatives . We become solitude , and sometimes we will sense a feeling of loneliness .

 

As a consequence , as far as I am concerned , I don’t think of watching television as a better choice than reading books . Conversely , we can gain more from reading books .   

沙发
发表于 2007-8-24 08:07:00 | 只看该作者

你可以先参考该版置顶的帖子里边的修改集合

然后我在iBT区有一个写作的帖子,你也可以参考一下

然后发现自己的一些问题,进行修改过后再发上来

我进行具体的修改

板凳
发表于 2007-8-24 11:47:00 | 只看该作者

文章好像有点短啊

不过结构很好 没问题了

具体的论述好像不太够

个人观点哈~

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-24 21:22:00 | 只看该作者

写完后我已经修改过一次了。。。是不是水平比较差啊?

我会再看看的。。。谢谢^_^

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-24 21:24:00 | 只看该作者

我觉得三十分钟写一篇这样子的文章对我来说还是有点困难的,呵呵。。。

我这篇文章300多字哦。。。如果太短的话那我需要写多少字才够啊?

谢谢你们的指点^_^

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发表于 2007-8-25 13:46:00 | 只看该作者
根据新东方老师的讲法  他要求要400以上  到现在我也不知道能不能写得完……
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