第一篇作文,粗粗地改了一下,汗哪,真是拿不出手,不过还是希望jojo稍微指导一下,给个评价也可以,看来这一个月真是任重道远啊! Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? A person's childhood years are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Which is the most significant stage in one’s whole life? The answer differs from person to person. Adolescent is one of the most convincible answers, nevertheless, in my opinion it is one’s childhood that plays an important role in one's future development. Following are the reasons offered to support my point of view. All knows it that "It is never too old to learn", however, I also like to say that “It is ever too young to learn”. Childhood is best time for us to learn language, science subjects, and musical instrument, that is why parents attach so much emphasis children's education. They try every means to ensure good education of their children. In order to get the entrance to Key elementary school, one of my relatives even donated forty thousand RMB. They said that children’s education is the foundation of a promising future. What's more, one forms his/her outlook on life that affects our whole life. I learned that the world is so beautiful when they took me to Zhongshan parrk to a flower exhibit. I understood that it is a shame to lie when talked with my father after lied for not breaking the vase. I knew that communication is much more effective than a fight when punished by my teacher for fighting with a classmate for some misunderstandings. My childhood makes me a kind, honest and diligent person. The attitude toward and the ability to overcome difficulties are also gained in one’s childhood which contribute a lot to one’s optimistic attitude toward life. Myself is a good case in point. Once I was chosen to take a math’s competition, however, I was the mediocre one among those competitors. Frustrated by not getting high score in exams, I am tired of learning. Fortunately, I finally realized that it is no use complaining all day, put more time on study is a better way to solve the problem Although adolescent also plays an important role for one’s future development, taking account of all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion it is advisable for us to attach much more importance to children’s education for it is the best stage to learn and the crucial time to cultivate a good habit. |