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           The best way my school spends a gift of money

   When it comes to the dilemma that what aspects the school is ought to allocate the funds, I suppose that no other elements than employing the money in computer would be more favorable.

    It’s universally deemed that we’re living in a new era of fraught with information. Under such circumstances, computer inevitably serves as an indispensable factor in various areas. In reality, hardly could we find anything which is irrelevant to computer. In a world that has increasingly focused on computer, we can say without a doubt that the popularity of computer makes it urgent to provide avenues so that our students can have a quick access to computer.

   First and foremost, computer, acting as an effective tool to look up information, brings a substantial amount of benefits to students. Compared with a sea of books in the library, computer enables students to surf on line and approach to the desired information rapidly and profoundly. What’s more, updating rate on line maintains particularly fast at all times, which benefits students or professors who are dedicating themselves in cutting age research. With the assistance of computer, they could obtain a up-to-date and comprehensive understanding of the field they engage. In this sense, no one would doubt that arrival of computer exercises positive impact on the promotion of academic level and atmosphere of school.

   Additionally, in regards to management of school, computer also plays an essential role in advancing the system. For instance, curriculums are arranged constructively by programs designed in the computer. Furthermore, expenditure of school in a set period will be distinctly printed out if necessary through computer. Specific list consisting of staff’s salary, are capable of being calculated and even transferred to relevant bank via computer. Without any doubt, the emergence of computer will tremendously eliminate the foregone errors and trivia.

   In conclusion, I firmly maintain the assertion that computer is supposed to be entitled a priority when funds are allocated. Obviously, computer has become a prerequisite for a stimulating job. With the advent of computer, not only could students get an edge on their peers in job-hunting, but also the competence and reputation of the entire school will definitely enhance.  

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[此贴子已经被作者于2006-11-28 13:04:01编辑过]