23. TheIroquois were primarily planters, but supplementing their cultivation ofmaize, squash, and beans with fishing andhunting. (A) but supplementing (B) and hadsupplemented (C) and even thoughthey supplemented (D) although theysupplemented (E) but withsupplementing 思路:翻译:易洛魁族人主要以耕种为主,尽管他们也以鱼猎来补充他们玉米,南瓜,豆子.的耕种 A:but 链接一个分词 和一个句子,不平行 ; The Iroquois were primarily planters,这里面的were是系动词。而but the Iroquois were supplementing这里面的were是助动词.两个were功能不同,不可共用,后面那个were不可以省略。而且就算这么补了,时态确实也不对,weresupplementing表示他们的补充行为到现在还没结束 ; B 原文含有一个转折的概念,不能随便去掉或者换掉;如果主句和分句主语相同,并且以and ,but,before等连接,如果句子逻辑上存在先后顺序,主从句都用 一般过去时即可,不必用过去完成时了强调这种先后顺序 。除非有明确的时间标志词表达先后顺序。 C:and even though 两个连词,后面要两个动词,这里句子残缺 为什么说后面要跟两个连词。and even though 能够连用吗?应该是不可以的吧 D: bingo ,一般过去时的平行,逻辑合理; E:的but with连用,awkward,这里不是介词的平行 ; but是连词,连接句子和介词短语 ,不平行
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