64. (27947-!-item-!-188;#058&003452) Recently documented examples of neurogenesis, the production of new brain cells, include the brain growing in mice when placed in a stimulating environment or neurons increasing in canaries that learn new songs. (A) the brain growing in mice when placed in a stimulating environment or neurons increasing in canaries that (B) mice whose brains grow when they are placed in a stimulating environment or canaries whose neurons increase when they (C) mice's brains that grow when they are placed in a stimulating environment or canaries' neurons that increase when they (D) the brain growth in mice when placed in a stimulating environment or the increase in canaries' neurons when they (E) brain growth in mice that are placed in a stimulating environment or an increase in neurons in canaries that
考点:简洁有效(Rhetorical Construction) 逻辑表达(Logical Predication) 1) 当动词有名词形式时,就不要使用the +动词ing形式来表达其名词形式 2) 介词+动词分词在句首,逻辑主语等于主句的主语;在句尾,逻辑主语可能等于主句的主语,也可能等 于所修饰的动词的逻辑主语 (A) the brain…无法与the production of…平行;growing使用错误,应该用grow的名词形式growth来替 换,increasing应该用increase替换;介词结构when placed无论是修饰主句的主语还是所修饰动词 (include)的逻辑主语,该结构都是修饰的documented examples,而从逻辑意思上看,when placed应该 修饰mice,因此when placed修饰对象错误. (B) 改变句子意思,从未划线部分看,examples包括的对象应该能够表现neurogenesis,同位语对该词 进行了解释 the production of new brain cells,而选项B的例子包括的是mice和canaries,这两个动物 不是the production of new brain cells的例子,而应该用brain growth in mice和an increase in neurons in canaries作为the production of new brain cells的例子;指代错误,选项中的they分别就近指代brains 和neurons,导致了逻辑意思错误. (C) 代词they分别就近指代brains和neurons,导致逻辑意思错误 (D) when placed修饰documented examples,导致逻辑意思错误,代词they就近指代neurons,导致逻辑 意思错误 (E) 正确, brain growth in mice和an increase in neurons in canaries很好的作为了the production of new brain cells的例子;限定性定语从句that…分别修饰mice和canaries,修饰对象正确.
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44. (26787-!-item-!-188;#058&002971) Scientists at the Los Alamos National Laboratory have succeeded for the first time in mining heat from the Earth's interior and producing energy on a commercial scale, enough for efficient generation of electricity and heating factories and homes. (A) and producing energy on a commercial scale, enough for efficient generation of electricity and heating (B) and producing enough energy on a commercial scale for electricity to be generated efficiently and to heat (C) for energy production on a commercial scale, enough for generating electricity efficiently and to heat (D) to produce energy on a commercial scale, enough for generating electricity efficiently and for heating (E) to produce enough energy on a commercial scale for efficient generation of electricity and heat 考点: 平行对称(Parallelism)简洁有效(Rhetorical Construction) 1)表示目的时,to do结构比for结构更有效 2)有动词形式的时候尽量用动词形式,不要用动词的抽象名词形式 (A) have succeeded…and producing…前者是动词结构,后者是动名词结构不平行; enough for efficient generation…and heating前者是名词结构后者是动名词结构不平行;generation属于动词的抽 象名词不如动名词generating好 (B) and producing错误同A选项;… scale for electricity…and to heat, for结构和to do结构破坏了平行, 要么都用for结构,要么都用to do结构 (C) for结构不如to do结构表达目的有效;enough for generating…and to heat, for结构和to do结构破 坏了平行 (D) 正确, 使用to produce表达目的;enough for generating…and for heating结构平行,且使用动名词 形式,比动词的抽象名词形式更佳有效的表达的动作的意味. (E) heat跟produce平行,导致逻辑意思错误;generation不如generating好
求解,动词的名词形式和动名词到底哪个优先?这两题是不是矛盾了?
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