OG 13 SC 132 OG解释求指点

ddairy199

OG13-132：
Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year – they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises-heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.

A Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
B Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
C Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
D Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
E Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins

这题答案选B
E选项OG的解释是： Rhetorical structure requires that although appear in the beginning of the clause to which it pertains. Placing it later necessitates the pronoun they with antecedent heirloom tomatoes, which is redundant.
我对这个解释的理解是： although需要放在从属的句子的开头，如果把although放在句子后面，则需要在although后面重复antecedent，我的理解对吗？求大神指点！！！谢谢！

yiqing2012

额。。。理解反了。。。
这个解释就是说E中的they多余了或者说Heirloom tomatoes多余了，去掉grown from seeds saved during the previous year来看：Heirloom tomatoes although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins

句子结构显然不完整~

ddairy199

哦，谢谢！还想问一下， necessitate they with heirloom tomatoes是什么意思？还有OG解释的第一句怎么理解？谢谢！！！

yiqing2012

我仔细翻译了一下，貌似LZ之前的理解也对。。。
OG的意思就是说如果把although放在后面，那么其后必须有they指代heirloom tomatoes,但这样使heirloom tomatoes多余了~

ddairy199

谢谢！！！

cheer129

A.        句子有两个主语：although …, heirloon tomatoes, …,插入语, heirlooms are more flavorful； 且although让句子变成从句，因此整句话没有主句
B.        正确。插入语的内容也跟their round and red supermarket cousins最相关，形成对比，首先建立好感
C.        主句有两个主语：heirloom tomatoes,…, heirlooms are more flavorful
D.        Run-on sentence，两个句子见缺少连词
E.        Although之前的句子结构不完整

caichenha

cheer129 发表于 2013-4-20 22:00
A.        句子有两个主语：although …, heirloon tomatoes, …,插入语, heirlooms are more flavorful； 且altho ...

请问D选项哪里缺少连词？

Kya

caichenha 发表于 2013-7-21 12:17
请问D选项哪里缺少连词？

把分号的这个部分给去掉“– they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises-”之后，
heirloom tomatoes appear ......supermarket cousins
和heirlooms are more flavorful and thus.....这两个部分之间就缺少连词啦~
破折号那部分也就算个插入语存在，同along with...什么的语法结构类似

caichenha

Kya 发表于 2013-7-21 16:22
把分号的这个部分给去掉“– they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises- ...

明白了，谢谢！

nardo_lau

Kya 发表于 2013-7-21 16:22
把分号的这个部分给去掉“– they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises- ...

可是你说的这个去掉破折号的情况，对B来说不是一样也是使适用的吗？B也没有连接两个大句子的词呀？？？求解释啊！！！！