新ISSUE1 第一次写提纲

birdyhuang

1.As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. (26\64)

 1)Admittedly,too much reliance on the technology, to some extent, reduce the opportunities for people to think for themselves and weaken the capability of solving        problems on their own, especially  in fields concerning calculating. When it comes to some certain technical jobs demanding speed and accuracy,machines born from     science and technology will undoubtedly surpass human beings with their outstanding efficiency and endurance, leaving no time for people to even take any action.
 2)However, utilizing technologies properly won't cause any deterioration on humans.
   2.1)Created by humanity, technology can assist us when solving problems, taking advangtage of which will tremendously boost the pace of probing the nature, resulting in the evolution of humankind. Relieved from living issues, people can spare more time to study the internal of them.
   2.2)Furthermore, with the convenience brought to us, there are always some new problems coming together, which may only be settled by the thoughts and innovations         of humankind rather than by those current technologies.
 3)Whether it is beneficial or harmful for us to rely on technology may be determined by the extent to which we think and reflect. Only when we make full use of the     superiority technology in order to deepen our thoughts can the infinity of intellegence inside humans come into being.

这样对于一个提纲来说会不会显得太多了？还有，词语和用法是不是列提纲的时候没有太多要求？

竹林中人

提纲随便你怎么写都可以，只要意思明确就行。
你这个提纲我觉得还是很好的。

birdyhuang

好的~感谢哈~