prep 191 D与E的区别，后半句~~~谢谢啦

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For the last five years the Dutch economy has grown faster than Britain, France, or Germany, with the unemployment rate having remained well below that of the other three countries.

A.Britain, France, or Germany, with the unemployment rate having remained

B.have those of Britain, France, or Germany, and the unemployment rate remaining

C.have Britain, France, and Germany, and the unemployment rate has remained

D.the economy of Britain, France, and Germany, with the unemployment rate that has remained (E)

E.the economies of Britain, France, and Germany, and the unemployment rate has remained

lz不是很理解D和E后半句的区别，求nn指点一下~~

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ainiAnnie

排除选项可以用economy和economies，显然应该是economies~
至于with 我觉得这里用的也不是很好...进一步有待NN指点~

99qiuqiu

这题比较难，因为答案的逻辑意思和原句不一样了，但这其实也可以分析出来
（1）明确 economyhas grown和unemployment rate has remained well below是并列关系


, with the unemployment rate (that has remained well below that of the other threecountries)
S V O, with+n(独立)，这样表达前后有逻辑关系的歧义了，话说with+n表达的意思多了去了: 伴随？原因？不知道,但反正是修饰作用

举例
OG12
29. The end of the eighteenth century saw the emergence ofprize-stock breeding, with individualbulls and cows receiving awards, fetching unprecedented prices, and excited enormousinterest whenever they were put on show. （with+N+ving）

86. The results of the company’s cost-cutting measures areevident in its profits,which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after itfell over the last two years.
(A) which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months ofthis year after itfell
(B) which had increased 5 percent during the first 3 monthsof this year after it had fallen
(C) which haveincreased 5 percent during the first 3months of this year after falling
(D) witha 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after falling
(E) with a 5 percentincrease during the first 3 months of this year after having fallen

CCorrect. The verb tenses clearly indicate the sequence of events.
D It is not clear what connectionis being described by with; the prepositionalphrase makes the sentence wordy and unclear.
E It isnot clear what connection is being described by with; the prepositional phrase makesthe sentence wordy and unclear.

但是
。。。, and the unemployment ratehas remained well below that of the other three countries
就比较自然了


（2）
and the unemployment rate has remained well below that of the other threecountries
这个that指the unemployment rate很清晰

Suri在奋斗

D.the economy of Britain, France, and Germany, with the unemployment rate that has remained (E)

E.the economies of Britain, France, and Germany, and the unemployment rate has remained

with the unemployment感觉有修饰germany的歧义
而且 that···that 也好别扭呀
呼唤baby姐姐，(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

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D.the economy of Britain, France, and Germany, with the unemployment rate that has remained (E)

E.the economies of Britain, France, and Germany, and the unemployment rate has remained

with the unemployment感觉有修饰germany的歧义
而且 that···that 也好别扭呀
呼唤baby姐姐，(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

-- by 会员 Suri在奋斗 (2012/4/26 22:31:22)

先谢谢suriMM啦，这题我今天无意中看到了baby姐姐曾经分析过，baby姐姐主要用的是make sense与否来看~
其实baby姐的思路和4楼NN说的差不多，就是并列的原因，所以这时用with的时候，就不make sense~貌似就酱，O(∩_∩)O哈！

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这题比较难，因为答案的逻辑意思和原句不一样了，但这其实也可以分析出来
（1）明确economyhas grown和unemployment rate has remained well below是并列关系


, with the unemployment rate (that has remained well below that of the other threecountries)
S V O, with+n(独立)，这样表达前后有逻辑关系的歧义了，话说with+n表达的意思多了去了: 伴随？原因？不知道,但反正是修饰作用

举例
OG12
29. The end of the eighteenth century saw the emergence ofprize-stock breeding, withindividualbulls and cows receiving awards, fetching unprecedented prices, and excited enormousinterest whenever they were put on show. （with+N+ving）

86. The results of the company’s cost-cutting measures areevident in its profits,which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after itfell over the last two years.
(A) which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months ofthis year after itfell
(B) which had increased 5 percent during the first 3 monthsof this year after it had fallen
(C) which haveincreased 5 percent during the first 3months of this year after falling
(D) witha 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after falling
(E)witha 5 percentincrease during the first 3 months of this year after having fallen

CCorrect. The verb tenses clearly indicate the sequence of events.
DIt is not clear what connectionis being described by with; the prepositionalphrase makes the sentence wordy and unclear.
E It isnot clear what connection is being described by with; the prepositional phrase makesthe sentence wordy and unclear.

但是
。。。, and the unemployment ratehas remained well below that of the other three countries
就比较自然了


（2）
andthe unemployment rate has remained well below that of the other threecountries
这个that指the unemployment rate很清晰

-- by 会员 99qiuqiu (2012/4/26 22:21:58)

谢谢NN哈，分析的很到位啊，我先慢慢研读ing\(^o^)/~

Suri在奋斗

恩恩，加油哈，Alice MM~~~！！

Alice爱学习

恩恩，加油哈，Alice MM~~~！！

-- by 会员 Suri在奋斗 (2012/4/26 23:14:18)

谢谢啦suriO(∩_∩)O哈！