GWD25-Q10求解疑

TSFyfy

In 1926, in her second attempt to swim across the English Channel, Gertrude Ederle not only crossed the Channel against currents that Forced her to swim thirty-five miles instead of the minimal twenty-one, but she set a record for speed as well, by swimming the distance in almost two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
B.    but also set a record for speed, swimming the distance almost
two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
E.    but, swimming  the distance almost two hours faster than anyone
had yet done, she also set a record for speed.

想问下为什么D不对,不是说逗号后面要把主语给补出来吗? 划线部分前面有逗号.
E不好是因为插入语位置奇怪?还是因为破坏了not only...but also...的完美平行?

mslancaster

In 1926, in her second attempt to swim across the English Channel, Gertrude Ederle not only crossed the Channel against currents that Forced her to swim thirty-five miles instead of the minimal twenty-one, but she set a record for speed as well, by swimming the distance in almost two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
B.    but also set a record for speed, swimming the distance almost
two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
E.    but, swimming  the distance almost two hours faster than anyone
had yet done, she also set a record for speed.

想问下为什么D不对,不是说逗号后面要把主语给补出来吗? 划线部分前面有逗号.
E不好是因为插入语位置奇怪?还是因为破坏了not only...but also...的完美平行?

-- by 会员 TSFyfy (2012/3/24 4:52:03)

swimming引导的是状语，对set record这个动作做补充修饰
XDF好像讲过状语的位置不能轻易发生变化，而且E莫名其妙的加了一个She
通常not only but also， both and这样的并列结构要么充当并列内容核心成分的介词、名词都在结构内，要么就在结构外有一个就行

TSFyfy

In 1926, in her second attempt to swim across the English Channel, Gertrude Ederle not only crossed the Channel against currents that Forced her to swim thirty-five miles instead of the minimal twenty-one, but she set a record for speed as well, by swimming the distance in almost two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
B.    but also set a record for speed, swimming the distance almost
two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
E.    but, swimming  the distance almost two hours faster than anyone
had yet done, she also set a record for speed.

想问下为什么D不对,不是说逗号后面要把主语给补出来吗? 划线部分前面有逗号.
E不好是因为插入语位置奇怪?还是因为破坏了not only...but also...的完美平行?

-- by 会员 TSFyfy (2012/3/24 4:52:03)

swimming引导的是状语，对set record这个动作做补充修饰
XDF好像讲过状语的位置不能轻易发生变化，而且E莫名其妙的加了一个She
通常not only but also， both and这样的并列结构要么充当并列内容核心成分的介词、名词都在结构内，要么就在结构外有一个就行

-- by 会员 mslancaster (2012/3/24 5:14:25)

谢谢啊.但是还有个疑问, X not only... but also...确实不需要补出主语.但如果X not only verb. ..., but also X verb...  
but also前跟了个逗号,也不需要补出主语吗?

mslancaster

In 1926, in her second attempt to swim across the English Channel, Gertrude Ederle not only crossed the Channel against currents that Forced her to swim thirty-five miles instead of the minimal twenty-one, but she set a record for speed as well, by swimming the distance in almost two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
B.    but also set a record for speed, swimming the distance almost
two hours faster than anyone had yet done.
E.    but, swimming  the distance almost two hours faster than anyone
had yet done, she also set a record for speed.

想问下为什么D不对,不是说逗号后面要把主语给补出来吗? 划线部分前面有逗号.
E不好是因为插入语位置奇怪?还是因为破坏了not only...but also...的完美平行?

-- by 会员 TSFyfy (2012/3/24 4:52:03)

swimming引导的是状语，对set record这个动作做补充修饰
XDF好像讲过状语的位置不能轻易发生变化，而且E莫名其妙的加了一个She
通常not only but also， both and这样的并列结构要么充当并列内容核心成分的介词、名词都在结构内，要么就在结构外有一个就行

-- by 会员 mslancaster (2012/3/24 5:14:25)

谢谢啊.但是还有个疑问, X not only... but also...确实不需要补出主语.但如果X not only verb. ..., but also X verb...  
but also前跟了个逗号,也不需要补出主语吗?

-- by 会员 TSFyfy (2012/3/24 5:22:21)

引用XDF赵丽的一句话：与其花很多时间研究错误的选项怎么改正确，不如大量的多读一些整个的正确的句子去训练对正确句子的语感。考试的时候不会有那么多时间做分析，错误的句子错误都太多了，一一改正是庞大的工程。