请教一下各位Verbal 2nd 79

angelcity

the computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for 950 million,which is part of a deal that will make the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.

(D) million as a part of a deal to make
(E)million as part of a deal that will

选E,但是D的问题虽然OG说了出在"a"和"to make",但我觉得a part, to make没啥不可以,挺清楚的。请帮助看看,谢谢!
OG- this sentence is a little awkward (the article a in a part is unnecessary) and says something rather different. "as a part of deal to make" sugeests that the deal itself includes making the company the "largest manufacturer" rather than its being the outcome of the deal.

用头走路

？E？E是不是少了一个make啊？

angelcity

抱歉，E里是还有一个make,继续问~

balapupu

话说我也不懂~~查了下manhattan~
if you use the infinitive "to make", then the computer company is still the subject of the sentence. therefore, in this case you have to use the reflexive pronoun: itself. as an analogy, i can't look at me in the mirror, but i can look at myself in the mirror. same deal.

in choice (e), "...that will make..." shifts the role of subject to deal, so a reflexive pronoun is no longer needed. in fact, the reflexive pronoun would be absurd in this case, since a deal obviously can't make itself the largest manufacturer in the market.

angelcity

感谢楼上诸位!我先把这个当作知识点记下了，语感这类东西不是朝夕之功.诸位加油!

angelcity

BTW, Manhattan 上有verbal 2nd的题啊，我以前查OG的题都没有。我以为那上面只能查到prep的题,好啊~~

flhuihui1001

angelcity 发表于 2011-8-30 10:39
BTW, Manhattan 上有verbal 2nd的题啊，我以前查OG的题都没有。我以为那上面只能查到prep的题,好啊~~ ...

楼上指有verbal 2nd的manhattan是哪本啊？SC分册吗？。。我这没看到啊。。