【AI029】两天后一战，把高频AI029写了两遍，跪求指点~

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复习时间不够，昨天才写了第一篇issue，因为头两次掐时间，在30min内就没有来得及展开完。。贴上来不完整的有点不好意思，主要是想了解一下哪种写法比较好？另外，如果来不及展开，但是结构完整，字数有400，分数会不会还是很低？下面第一篇是比较拘谨拼凑书面语去写的，第二篇是按照自己的感觉写的，求指点~



Issue No.29
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Question:


`Too many people think only about gettingresults. The key to success, however, is to focus on the specific task at handand not to worry about results.

What do you think this piece of advicemeans, and do you think that it is, on the whole, worth following? Support yourviews with reasons and/or examples drawn from your own experience,observations, or reading.

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Your Answer:
（311words）People from the past to the present timenever have stop exploring and discovering approaches to sucess. Differentpeople might have different opinion about how to define sucess, yet some peopleshare the same view that the key to sucess is to fucus on the specific task athand rather than to worry about results. Admittely, this claim revealreasonable concern about the importance of empivical efforts; yet in spite ofthe significance of the specific tasks needed to be done on the way to sucess,a well-organized long-term scheduel should be made - at least thought about -before jumping into any form of work.

As mentioned above, to achieve any greatgoals requires the basic patience to get all the trivial but indispensibletasks done - not only fully, but also nicely. As a quite old saying puts, Romeisn't built in one day. Leading to sucess isn't a one-step mission to complete;To accomplish sucess requires to get down on the ground and to complete everygoal that is necessary for one to be successful. This basic requirement can berevealed in an interesting pheonominon - CASK e

Yet, the necessity to be enthusiasiticabout every single specific details doesn't indicate in any way that onedoesn't need to spare some time to draw the big picture as their guide in along span.

In fact, not only shouldn't one neglect themajor role their expectations play in the whole persuit of sucess, but he orshe also should pause for a short time in the process of working in order toadjust their path according to their dreamed results.

Therefore, it's not appropriate to focuseither merely on every details of the work needed to get sucessful or simply onunrealisitic hollow goals. One should take both of these two into account toobtain the bet outcomes.

第二次写ISSUE 29：(427words，3 4段展开未完)People talk about how to achievegood results all the time. This piece of advice suggests that thinking aboutresults isn't a good way to get successful and instead to focus on the specifictasks attached to the ultimate goal is. In my opinion, this suggestion is soundin some aspects but still could be misleading for one who are striving forsuccess.
Success, as the advisor put, is greatly in needof adequate attention on the small tasks which can make success more likely tohappen. The ones who are always day-dreaming and seldomly take actualactions on the trivial tasks can hardly be successful; If one don't even havethe patience and ability to get one single and easy mission done, how cananyone expect him or her to be capable of handling complex and difficult jobs?Take Steve Jobs as an example: Steve Jobs, the founder of the Apple Corp.,claimed in several of his speeches that he wasn't sure about what he wanted atfirst (when he was in college), yet in the process of experiencing differentkinds of jobs, each of which seemed not too complicated, he gruaduallycollected what he needed for success without knowing the subtle changeshappening to him. The same rule applies to most people - one shouldn't wait forone single task to get to success but should try hard in every task related -sometimes even not related.
However, no matter how important thetrivial and maybe even boring tasks that contribute to one's success are, oneshould never forget that they are after all only triffles. To be successful,the first step is to be sure about how does the final destination might looklike. Zhang Qian, a famous constructor of China a century ago who designed andbuilt the first modern railway in China, wouldn have never made the marvelhappen if he hadn't made his determination that he build it for him

Moreover, setting goals and keepingenthusiastic about the goals is a surprisingly good way to help the ones thatare temporarily trapped in a difficulty on their road to success.

Therefore, I admit that the advisor ispartially right about the siginificance of not worrying about results; yet Idon't totally agree with him for that the image of the world that one isdreaming of can always lend incredibily great will power and confidence for oneto keep on fighting for his or her dream, and can make sure that one neverdigress too far from the right path.

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