【已解决】GWD-TN-23-Q16:PP52关于A选项的错误

wenchang

Although at onetime children’s programming had been limited to a few hours a week, now,however, there are at least four cable networks that dedicate themselvesentirely to shows produced specificallyfor children.
A.Although at onetime children’s programming had been limited to a few hours a week, now,however, there are at least four cable networks that dedicate themselves
B.With children’s programming having beenlimited at one time to a few hours a week, now at least four cable networks have dedicated themselves
C.Once limited to a few hours a week, thereare now at least four cable networks with children’s programming that dedicatethemselves
D.Children’s programming was once limited to a few hours a week, but now thereare at least four cable networks dedicated
E.While children’s programming had once beenlimited to a few hours a week, at least four cable networks are now dedicated
答案是D，我想问的是A中的错误是什么？是Although和however两个表示转折的连词意思重复么？请NN指点

wenchang

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eshopaholic

A:" had been limited" 比" was limited"  wordy,  "dedicate themselves" 比 "dedicated"  wordy

eshopaholic

还有 就是 重复 啦

wenchang

恩，过了这么几天重新读一遍感觉确实是重复

小羽羽

2个转折，不知所谓；且主要是过完时态错，无时态对比
另A.that dedicate themselves，修饰network，network不能主动dedicate，应该去掉that，直接用dedicated

lala974

楼上+1

EMMALIULIU

小羽羽 发表于 2010-10-19 10:31
2个转折，不知所谓；且主要是过完时态错，无时态对比另A.that dedicate themselves，修饰network，network ...

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