【再问】T-4-Q22

slamshady

Unlike the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.

A.    the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries
B.    the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights
C.    the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries
D.    the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights
E.    the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries

这里之所以选D而不选B，是不是因为B的独立主格无法表明"their“具体指谁，而D用了定语从句使"their"与主句关系更密切，有指代对象？

weirui5621

看了半天突然发现B的用词重复 ： sufficient和enough

jtrchina

选项B:
1.作者原意是强调the shuttle and earlier spacecraft有“能力”自携带能源供给，以此来比较permanently orbiting space station的“无能”，必须自己发电，从而凸显两者对于能源供应方式的不同之处，with无法体现出这层含义。
2.如果题目没给错，sufficient enough power用词重复了，sufficient 与enough均表示足够的意思。

这题指代应该不是考点，因为B和D语法上都可以指代较近的fuel cells and batteries

slamshady

看了半天突然发现B的用词重复 ： sufficient和enough

-- by 会员 weirui5621 (2010/5/8 23:18:48)

诶。。。对哦 我怎么就没看出来呢 呵呵~~~

slamshady

选项B:
1.作者原意是强调the shuttle and earlier spacecraft有“能力”自携带能源供给，以此来比较permanently orbiting space station的“无能”，必须自己发电，从而凸显两者对于能源供应方式的不同之处，with无法体现出这层含义。
2.如果题目没给错，sufficient enough power用词重复了，sufficient 与enough均表示足够的意思。

这题指代应该不是考点，因为B和D语法上都可以指代较近的fuel cells and batteries

-- by 会员 jtrchina (2010/5/8 23:26:33)

嗯嗯。。。有道理 谢谢指点！

sofeia

[quote]
Unlikethe short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries, a permanently orbiting space station will have to generate its own electricity.

A.    the shortflights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which carried sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries
B.    the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, with sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights
C.    the short flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which enabled them to carry sufficient enough power in fuel cells and batteries
D.    the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, which were capable of carrying sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries for their short flights
E.    the flights of the shuttle and earlier spacecraft, whose shortness allowed them to carry sufficient power in fuel cells and batteries

分析：
1。Unlike 在句首=考点“比较对象对等”。一长串 a permanently orbiting space station 主语主干只有一个，即station，紧紧抓住它。无论之前的定语修饰词多长，都忽略它，因为其作用只有一个，将你绕迷糊，让你在考场意识到自己乱套了，接下来的句子意思（至少在30秒内）可能不懂了。你的策略只有一个---忽略主语主干之外的一切修饰。这样你就排除了flights做主语的三个选项。当然flights也以不同的形式出现了。因为出题者很清楚，至少有30%的考生，没看出来这个考点。所以给他们一个在错误选项中选择一个最不象错误项的机会。好仁慈啊。。。

2。看明白Unlike考点后，你看到了B和D项。发现他俩第一句一样，而且之后都用逗号分开---说明这段没问题。再往下看，
B。with+名词短语+X个修饰成分---- 构成这样的句型：                                       Unlike A, with+名词短语，B+谓语+宾语。
D。which WERE capable of---WERE的时态由which所修饰的名词支持。句型： Unlike A, which+谓语+宾语，B+谓语+宾语。

如果这个时候，你还对比较的原文内容不是十分有把握，那么不妨从语法角度分析。正确答案很明显，犹如错误项的错误很明显一样。

此外，原文未划线部分（一定要关注！！！直接暗示你正确选项中必须具备的因素，如词汇，事态，形式等）中的will, generate, its own都明显与正确答案中的相应词汇形成了对比的关系，并最终形成完美的WSJ中常用的“比较句型--从头比较到尾”的句型。还有一个固定用法 sufficient enough to/for 。。。。指示正确答案的暗示很多。。。

希望对你分析该题有帮助。

slamshady

还有一个固定用法 sufficient enough to/for 。。。。指示正确答案的暗示很多。。。

-- by 会员 sofeia (2010/5/9 0:42:15)

额。。。这不就是说B是对的么？不理解~~~

slamshady

哦。。。对 我刚想起来好像是有这个用法的，阿姆有首歌go to sleep，里面就有，晕。。。天天在嘴边唱居然没发现！
I Ain't going to eat, I ain't going to sleep
Ain't going to breath till I see what I wanna see
And what I wanna see is you go to sleep in the dirt
Permanently...you just being hurt
This ain't going to work for me, it just wouldn't be
Sufficient enough...cuz we...are just going to be...enemies
As long as we breathe, I don't ever see...either of us
Coming to terms...when we can agree
There ain't gonna be
No reason, speaking with me

哎。。。看来这道题更加扑朔迷离了。。。。

weirui5621

晕 楼主连歌都唱出来了 我很无语啊

slamshady

晕 楼主连歌都唱出来了 我很无语啊

-- by 会员 weirui5621 (2010/5/9 11:55:06)

呵呵。。。考试压力大，给大家放松放松~~~~