请教OG12-88

xinxian0

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz tradition.





(A)     Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

   (B)     Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

   (C)     Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted  

   (D)     Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

   (E)     Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

为什么D选项里的that was 不是wordy 的呢？ 正如68题的A项和80题的D项， 解释都说that were/that are 是wordy的，为什么这里就是对的呢？

myungryong

个人觉得 虽然d是wordy 但这仅仅是相对性错误
但是abce都是绝对性错误 （abe both用法错误 c没有谓语动词）

相比abce c的错误可以原谅

有错误的地方请指教~~

venus2elva

同意LS.

翻了一下OG解释，分析到A,C,E的时候都没有说rooted作分词修饰work会有任何歧义，说明正确答案中的that was完全可以省，ETS不认为省了有什么不好。
但确实是effectiveness的错误

xinxian0

谢谢楼上两位指教~清楚很多了~

abjure

同意LS 分析。 GMAC比较是相对最优选项