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发表于 2010-4-13 16:39:49 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
GWD-12-Q31:
Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
A. Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering
B. Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
C. Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886and outnumbering
D. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering
E. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

这道题答案E..正确的。想问A为什么不对呢?
分词作后置状语从句修饰letters似乎也可以阿。。
谢谢!
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-13 23:37:22 | 只看该作者

继续寻问中。

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板凳
发表于 2010-4-14 21:38:47 | 只看该作者
我觉得A对letter的修饰太多了,有点儿主次颠倒,这道题的意思应该以outnumber为主,而letter用which修饰比较好,而且A的outnumber修饰的对象也不清楚
地板
发表于 2010-4-15 01:33:36 | 只看该作者
A的结构从语法角度上看很完美,没有任何问题。但是从逻辑上来看有些问题,即written over a period与number之间并不是因果关系。因为这里的伴随状语只能用来表示结果的,这样子表达的意思变为:因为这些信写于某个时间段,所以他总数超过了他写给其他人的信。这个表达明显是有问题的。修改的方式有两个:1)把written over a period改为letters的定语从句 2)将were written与outnumber用and连接以表示两个关于信件但不是很相干的事实。

欢迎nn赐教。
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-4-15 02:06:17 | 只看该作者

en..

楼上的说得有道理,确实outnumbering 放在后面有结果的嫌疑。句子重心按逻辑来讲应该是outnumber是谓语。。
thanks! ^^
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