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TWE154---smoking......困死了。劳烦德克^-^

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楼主
发表于 2007-6-13 00:48:00 | 只看该作者

TWE154---smoking......困死了。劳烦德克^-^

强忍着困倦阿。。。真是眼皮都撑不住了。。。勉强下总算完成。。。没掐时间。。。 。。。自我感觉一般般。。。还是希望大家多多批评,给我建议~谢谢~ 困死了。。。要睡觉。。。

 

Topic: In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position.

 

Just yesterday, I read an investigation in newspaper, which demonstrated that the number of smokers in China has been up to one billion since 2006. So astonishing is the huge amount. Yet there is another data that shows us those who undergo second-hand smoking in public places may be four time the former number. As the demands for banning smoking in public situation rising up, however, some opponents emerge with voice of disagreement, and in current, this problem is becoming a hot-button debate day in and day out gradually. From my perspective, considering couple of primary harms of smoking, I believe firmly that making regularity for banning smoking in public places is a must-do task.

 

Physically, people, at present, tend to be more vulnerable to some fatal disease. To seek for the reasons, scientists have done massive work and multitudes of studies have illustrated that the toxic substances from cigarettes are one of principal causes for people’s healthy problems. As a matter of fact, most of the patients suffering from lung cancer are not smokers, but they play passive roles to be forced to accept the negative impact from smokers, as victims. Invariably, it is not rare to find out the addicts of smoking in public places, such as parks, shopping malls and offices, who swallow the smoke and than release it out again. Although the enjoyment of cigarettes brings smokers with plenty of joy, the existence of some other poor non-smokers around of them cannot be ignored. To protect the benefits of those who don’t rely on smoking but undergo the harm of it, obviously, to ban the smoking in public is the optimal one.

 

Health of multitudes is only part of picture; also, public security seems to be another significant reason. Fire, a necessity to smokers, hides too many hazards. It is not difficult for us to imagine a circumstance that all the buildings and the voice for help are sinking into the ocean of flames, nonetheless, the original of this frightful accident is just an extremely short remain of a cigarette. Facing the security of the whole people, none has the authority to be so selfish that other’s happiness and even life are appearing to be located upon a landmine which may explode unpredictably. Smoking forbidden in public situation is called for by multitudes and government in this case.

 

Admittedly, the effects the ban against public smoking is not positive all the time. For instance, those who rely on smoking for a long time will face a challenge to get rid of it, bankruptcy of Cigarettes Corporation tends to be more possible and there is a risk of governmental financial reduction results from the taxation loss of cigarettes. However, despite of above negative impacts, none can be compared with the public health and security. In a word, I support to make a rule to end the smoking in public places.


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沙发
发表于 2007-6-13 08:20:00 | 只看该作者
真实越写越好了!
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-6-13 14:13:00 | 只看该作者
真的阿!好振奋。一定继续努力!!!不过现在得去午睡会儿。。。困的不行了。。。
地板
发表于 2007-6-13 15:20:00 | 只看该作者

不过

二手烟这个概念太诡异了,你用second-hand人家会觉得很奇怪

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-6-13 17:27:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用德克的猪在2007-6-13 15:20:00的发言:

不过

二手烟这个概念太诡异了,你用second-hand人家会觉得很奇怪

这样嘎~我以为老外也知道这个呢。。。那要怎么表述才比较合适呢?要用个解释性的从句在后面解释一下吗?

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发表于 2007-6-13 17:36:00 | 只看该作者
我也不知道,这个概念太新..没有接触
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