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a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community.discuss the adventage and disadventage of this new influence on your community.do you support or oppose the factory?explain your position.


in my opinion,it is a preferable idea to build a new factory near my community. i live in a big city where there are a lot of factories.as a cosequnece,i see the benefit of factories.a new facotry can prepare more oppurtunity of jobs for people.it also brings a change of the traffic.and what else it can benefit us is that it is some way to develop economy.

more chance of a new job will be provided when a factory is being built.it seems that a large number of labour are needed when the factory is being constructed.it also requires skillful archetects who is of great importance that in charge of the consruction.in my home town.my uncle and some other of my relatives who have no jobs were employed when a factory built near their home in the year 2007.

furthermore,a great change will take place after a factory built.since the factory have to run it's business,more and more people will come and go.that is to say the government will spent money to improve the traffic facilities.the government of shanghai china paid a lot of money to construction team so as to repair the bridge and road which leads to an area where there are many factories every year.it is more easy for the transportation to go through with various ingredient go in and product come out.

another reason that should not be ignored is that it is a fantasitic way to develop the local economy.there is a research given out by the shanghai government about the changes of an area which built some factories step by step.in the first year there were only three factories and the average income of local inhabitants is quite low about 2000yuan per month,while the income raise to the number of 5000 per month for a preson after a few years later that a large number of factories constructed.which effecitively support my theory.

although there are problem such as water pollution,i still regard it as a preferable way to build a factory near my community so as to provide us more benefit.

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