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External appearance lies, never ever believe it! It is a radical theory, but I believe a correct one. It will suffice to mention one of my experiences. 立意不明确，小学生作文，议论文当
开头见山。 Personally, I support that a person should never judge a person by external appearances. In our real life, so many examples and experiences give us the right view that we judge a person should by their style of conversation, expression in their eyes, external appearance and etc. As we know, the clothing’s styles of so many rich people are so common. For example, some bosses of enterprise always dress the uniform is same as the worker or common office clerks. Maybe just only one gold watch will let us think that person is a boss. In Europe and North America, the rich man or the member of royal family looks like a common townspeople.
When I was in Senior 2, one day, a girl who was more than elegant and graceful came into my sight-suddenly, I found it extremely difficult for me who was under intense aesthetic moving to resist the suggestion that I was caught in a glimpse that shined down to me from another realm of existence, different but someway higher. I was utterly astonished by her beauty.
I sought for a long time only to find the language used to describe things in our world was next to impossible to depict another. Finally, I found the word “immaculate” for her inconceivable appearance. I wanted to “hook up” with her, and we had some short message communication, not so many, but enough to throw me into an illusion.(啰嗦) In the coming days, I virtually wasted my whole days to adore her until I found a wholly unacceptable and inconsolable truth-she was dating with a middle aged man-for once when I was walking past the Hilton Hotel I saw her with that man. At first I, of course, did not believe. However, after a month’s observation, I found it a week routine.
（很啰嗦，没有连贯起来，用词太大了） In addition, if we judge a person only by external appearance, we will make mistake or bring some trouble for us. In my memory, one day of my Senior 2, an elegant and graceful girl was coming into my sight-suddenly. At that time, it’s so unbelievable for me because of the girl’s beautiful aspect. I cannot find a suitable word or sentence to describe the beautiful in my eyes now.
(我自己的觉得我的这句话也很啰嗦，不过，照楼主的原文来改，只能这样了 )
As a young man, I want to go after or even hook up her. Then I talked with her and got some information about her. You can image, in the coming days, I spend so many time to make some relationship with her. However, one day I was walking past the Hilton Hotel, I found that the beautiful young girl was dating with a middle-aged man. Certainly, I think it’s not true, but after a month’s observation, I know that dating was made every weekend.
这段我实在改不下去了，楼主，自己好好进步吧 A bolt from the blue, wasn’t it? I was a fool at that time-though this is a skeptical age, our faith in people’s appearances still tenaciously maintains. Appearance, actually, never fails to lead to misunderstanding, as our first impression is invariably decided by people’s appearance. One is wise and friendly might be born with a not so affable face; and one is not immaculate at all, just as mentioned, might be given an angle-like face. To avoid unnecessary and unpleasant prejudice, indubitably, we might as well set one’s appearance aside and use communicating methods or other ones to know more about her/him. Via this way, I believe unshakably, our judge would be much more accurate and fair. This event gave me a class, that the beautiful aspect does not mean the good character and morals.
That is a real story of mine. (也许我会找个简洁的更有意义的例子) And we can find so many story and example in our life. The ashmen, farmers and other common workers are very nice people. Maybe their clothing is not fashion or beautiful, and their talking style is not wise or grace because of the lacking education. So the argument that a person should never judge a person by external appearances is very correct. And I will deal with my study, working and life as this argument.
哇，楼主好好进步吧。看看范文，再写吧。   
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