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Topic 136:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

     Game is popluar among people ranging from children to aged person. Whoever was involved in it always does their best to win the game. Because some people think the only fun in it is the winning. But there're still some can find more fun in it. And I belong to the latter. Following is my reasons.
     First of all, the achievment of the game is not the only memory for the player, especially in some complex games. To win it, the players might take advantage of their force, their brain, their velcity and the corporation with other fellow players. All these will make the player learn from either the game itself or the other players. And the learning could give the player more satisfation and fun even than the winning. Everytime you finished the game, realizing you get better than the last time could still make yourself happy, because you are more near to the winning.
     Secondly, game is a good way to communicate with others. Game mostly need more than one person to proceed. Cosequently, the player in it must either counter with the rivals or cooperate with allies, even both of them. So through the game we can get more imformation about them such as their forces, their way of thinking, their attitude facing the allevit point. Getting a good friend is a great thing.
      Though the winning is frequently considered as the biggest prize in the game, it's not the only prize in it just if you play it with your soul and heart.

还有不到一个月了，可是作文写起来总觉得没什么话说，偶尔有些话又不知怎么用英文说，郁闷啊

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-4-21 17:06:36编辑过]