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Having been named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, the asteroid named Ida, in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sunbetween Mars and Jupiter, was discovered in 1884.

(A) Having been named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infantJupiter, the asteroid named Ida, in the middle of the belt of asteroids thatorbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter, was discovered in 1884.

(B) Discovered in 1884, the asteroid Ida, named for a mythological nymphwho cared for the infant Jupiter, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter.

(C) In the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Marsand Jupiter, the asteroid Ida, discovered in 1884 and named for amythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter.

(D) The asteroid Ida, named for a mythological nymph who cared for theinfant Jupiter and discovered in 1884, is in the middle of the belt ofasteroids to orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter.

(E) Ida, an asteroid discovered in 1884 and which was named for amythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, is in the middle of thebelt of asteroids to orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter

答案是B.

og对D的解析 The sequence of events is obscured by the placement of named beforediscovered in the compound participial phrases. The infinitive form to orbitis ungrammatical in place of the relative clause.

请问and 并列还有前后时间关系吗？

b中的that 应该是指代the belt of asteroids 而不单单是asteroids吧？

谢谢

                                
                        
               
                                
                        
               
                                
                        
               

Gkibt

and 前后并列准确的说应该是动作发生的顺序。先发现，后命名。如果顺序颠倒，则不符合逻辑。and 前后除了语法平行，还要语义逻辑平行。

B中that 指代belt，就是 belt of asteroids。

emmahiggins09

Gkibt 发表于 2017-1-19 10:32
and 前后并列准确的说应该是动作发生的顺序。先发现，后命名。如果顺序颠倒，则不符合逻辑。and 前后除了语 ...

关于第二题that 的指代和我楼上的意见不一样，应该是指代的是asteroids , 因为后面的动词orbit 是复数而不是单数，如果指代的是belt 的话，动词应该是单数orbits 的情况

欢迎指正

Gkibt

emmahiggins09 发表于 2017-1-19 16:53
关于第二题that 的指代和我楼上的意见不一样，应该是指代的是asteroids , 因为后面的动词orbit 是复数而 ...

多谢！我遗漏了这一点，谢谢指正

怪兽圈

Gkibt 发表于 2017-1-19 10:32
and 前后并列准确的说应该是动作发生的顺序。先发现，后命名。如果顺序颠倒，则不符合逻辑。and 前后除了语 ...

谢谢

怪兽圈

emmahiggins09 发表于 2017-1-19 16:53
关于第二题that 的指代和我楼上的意见不一样，应该是指代的是asteroids , 因为后面的动词orbit 是复数而 ...

同意！