OG16 分册 SC 95

JJJ.

Floating in the waters of the equatorial Pacific, an array of buoys collects and transmits data on long-term interactions between the ocean and the atmosphere, interactions that affect global climate.
(A) atmosphere, interactions that affect
(B) atmosphere, with interactions affecting
(C) atmosphere that affects
(D) atmosphere that is affecting
(E) atmosphere as affects

正确答案是A。

有两个问题想要请教大家。
**B选项中，with结构为什么错？OG给出的解释是The prepositional phrase with… has no clear noun or noun phrase to attach to and is therefore ungrammatical。
在之前OG12 / OG15的86 / 90这道题也有with，RON大神给出的解释是in general, "COMMA + prep phrase modifier" is an adverbial modifier, meaning that it modifies the entirety of the preceding clause。可以套用这个解释来解释B这个选项吗？就是说B选项中with…修饰整个句子，但实际上本句划线部分只是想对interactions做一个补充说明，因此使用with…修饰整个句子不太恰当。
附：OG12 / OG15的86 / 90：（正确答案是C）
The results of the company’s cost-cutting measures are evident in its profits, which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after it fell over the last two years.
(A) which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after it fell
(B) which had increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after it had fallen
(C) which have increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after falling
(D) with a 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after falling
(E) with a 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after having fallen
其实关于with的用法一直都是一知半解的状况....可以的话，求详细解释with的用法......


**E选项中，OG解释到说The phrase as affects global climate functions as an adverb, but there is no verb for it to modify.想请教大家的是，在这里as affects本身有没有问题？我自己感觉as像是作连词，后加从句，但省略了从句的主语interactions，但是interactions又和affects主谓不一致，所以它省略的主语是atmosphere？如果是这样的话，那就和原句的语义不相同了....不知道这样理解对不对？

求各位大神们帮帮忙

JJJ.

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JJJ.

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Classy17

主要看修饰谁
BCDE 修饰的都有问题 尤其是B an array...., with xxxx 怎么讲都不对哦...

所以即便是A有瑕疵 也应该秒选的

后面您给的例题也是一样的
D和E the results...., with xxx

原句明显是要讨论 profits 的呀 profits（plural, 有it 修饰的肯定错）排除AB，修饰results的也肯定错排除DE。
剩下一个就选啦