现在分词表伴随（关于DUKB24的疑惑）

吸荷尔蒙鬼

看到DUKB24关于很多错误选项的解释都是comma+现在分词不对
例如：OG13，107的D选项，

While it costs about the same to run nuclear plants as other types of power plants, it is the fixed costs that stem from building nuclear plants that makes it more expensive for them to generate electricity.

(D) It costs about the same to run nuclear plants as for other types of power plants, whereas the electricity they generate is more expensive, stemming from the fixed costs of building nuclear plants.

OG13,115的C选项

115. Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas, they have already stimulated international disputes over uninhabited islands.

(C) Even tiny islets can be the basis for claims to the fisheries and oil fields of large sea areas under provisions of the new maritime code, already stimulating

但今天做OG诊断联系有正确答案是comma+v.ing
[size=13.913043975830078px]As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including[size=13.913043975830078px] Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.（正确答案C)

C

• [size=13.913043975830078px]Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several generations of actors whose ranks included  [size=13.913043975830078px]分析C选项[size=13.913043975830078px]谁能解释一下吗[size=13.913043975830078px]
  
  

emmahiggins09

闭眼看书 发表于 2017-2-8 12:37
关于comma who的问题，
I am the best student in our school, who won the gold prize.

按照层主中文的意思来看的话 这3句句子没有一句是对的。

句意要表达的主要意思是： 我获得了金奖 所以这个部分是应该是句子的主干。层主提供的三句句子(烦请层主提供例句来源，句子写的很奇怪) 表达获奖的英语部分用的都是从句（从句是modifier 的一种形式），从句从句意思上就是比主句弱的，modifier 也是一样的，修饰修饰就是用来修饰主要部分的次要内容

闭眼看书

关于comma who的问题，
I am the best student in our school, who won the gold prize.

I am one of the best students in our school, who won the gold prize.

I am the best student in our school who won the gold prize.
如果句意是“我获得了金奖”，这三个句子都没有语法问题吗

御寒

emmahiggins09 发表于 2017-1-9 21:58
建议层主捋一下 comma Ving 所有的用法。

其中的一个用法是 comma ving 前如果是主系表结构的话，comma  ...

我这块内容是很弱，，，多谢解答，我会去补功课的哈哈

emmahiggins09

御寒 发表于 2017-1-9 21:48
非常感谢您的解答和举例，我现在可以明白who错误修饰的是artists,语义肯定是错的。
Barbara这题我可以根 ...

建议层主捋一下 comma Ving 所有的用法。

其中的一个用法是 comma ving 前如果是主系表结构的话，comma ving 表示补充说明主系表结构

C中没有错误的修饰主语，这个用法是对的，是在对主语进行补充说明。

御寒

emmahiggins09 发表于 2017-1-9 21:06
Stella Adler 这题中 COMMA who 是错误得修饰了 artists 而原文的 intended meaning 是要修饰 Stella Adle ...

非常感谢您的解答和举例，我现在可以明白who错误修饰的是artists,语义肯定是错的。
Barbara这题我可以根据句尾没划线部分推断出which应该修饰hearings。但关于Stella这题的C选项，我还想请教一下，training不会有错误伴随主句主语，修饰不清之嫌吗？感谢！

emmahiggins09

御寒 发表于 2017-1-9 19:16
Stella adler这题，既然原文代词用的who,为什么不可以是Stella trained？从哪里可以判断必须是theater tra ...

Stella Adler 这题中 COMMA who 是错误得修饰了 artists 而原文的 intended meaning 是要修饰 Stella Adler 这个部分的，所以这里是错误的。而且要注意的是这里不是修饰的 theater 因为 theater 实在preposition中 ( in the American theater), 这中情况下 COMMA who / COMMA which（其实这个COMMA WHO 可以和 COMMA WHICH 一起记忆，用法都是一样的）, 都是跳过这个preposition 修饰前面最近的一个名词。这种跳跃修饰法在GMAT中时常出现而且GMAC是接受这种适当的跳跃修饰的。

最有名的跳过preposition 的便是下面这题了，下面的正确答案中的 COMMA which 便是跳过一串儿preposition (on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon) 修饰前面最近的一个复数名词 hearings

Although she had been known as an effective legislator first in the Texas Senate and later in the United States House of Representatives, not until Barbara Jordan’s participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon in 1974 was she made a nationally recognized figure, as it was televised nationwide.

A. later in the United States House of Representatives, not until Barbara Jordan’s participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon in
1974 was she made a nationally recognized figure, as it was
B. later in the United States House of Representatives, Barbara Jordan did not become a nationally recognized figure until 1974, when she participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, which were （正确）
C. later in the Untied States House of Representatives, it was not until 1974 that Barbara Jordan became a nationally recognized figure, with her participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, which was
D. then also later in the United States House of Representatives, not until 1974 did Barbara Jordan become a nationally recognized figure, as she participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, being
E. then also later in the United States House of Representatives, Barbara Jordan did not become a nationally recognized figure until 1974, when she participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon, which was

御寒

ukyo2003 发表于 2015-2-3 22:24
你发的几个题好乱啊，又不标下划线又不全，看的有点晕，就直接说一下吧。

逗号后面接ving有两种用法，一个 ...

Stella adler这题，既然原文代词用的who,为什么不可以是Stella trained？从哪里可以判断必须是theater trained?

请救非洲大象

ukyo2003 发表于 2015-2-3 23:03
Because there are provisions of the new maritime code that provide that even tiny islets can be the  ...

你好，请问这里c 中，stimulating为什么不能看成修饰的之前一整个句子，做结果状语呢？？谢谢～

ukyo2003

今天学到一个新知识点，逗号后面加including，相当于介词结构，不限于对主句主语修饰，而是根据上下文判断。