Prep08！！！求救求救求救！！一道题。。

garcia

The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction  
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
这里的D和E相比，为何选择E啊？prep08解释说D冗杂，修饰成分过多，这是在逗我吗。。。。？

zxzxy1988

D because it allows the transfer of (money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction) to (a branch in a more regulated one)).
E because it allows (money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction) to be transferred to (a branch in a more regulated one).
从结构上来看，D是说allows the transfer of sth to somewhere, E实说allows sth to be transferred to somewhere
个人认为这两个结构都可以，但是D中money的修饰(having been placed...)实在是不对
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yatina

Hi, garcia

理解划线部分的含义，主要看A句：
it allows money placed in X to be transfered to Y

D选项it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction  
将“money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction”都变成修饰成分放在“transfer of ”后，显得很冗余。

kiwifoodtown

having been placed 不能做定语，所以D错。