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The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.

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发表于 2013-7-8 15:27:42 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
70. The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.

(A) that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but

(B) that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also

(C) having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but

(D) cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also

(E) cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but

答案是E;这题中的with的解释没看懂
This sentence, explaining interconnections among a number of events, needs to be streamlined as much as possible in order to become understandable. To this end, unnecessary words and structures should be eliminated. Prominent among these are the relative clauses beginning with that. Additionally, the subject of this sentence is the plural trenches, which requires a plural verb.

A That were cut … and that were arising … are unnecessarily wordy and create an unnecessarily complicated and confusing sentence structure.

B In addition to the unnecessarily wordy relative clauses, the singular verb yields does not agree with the plural subject trenches.

C Having been cut … is unnecessarily wordy; arising simultaneously must be followed by the preposition with in order to make sense.

D The singular verb yields does not agree with the plural subject trenches; also adds no meaning to the sentence.

E Correct. Unnecessary clauses and phrases are avoided, and the subject and verb of the main clause agree in number.

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发表于 2015-6-23 10:49:19 | 只看该作者
看一下!               
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发表于 2014-9-24 10:39:25 | 只看该作者
lynn022 发表于 2014-7-19 21:25
我感觉E这个arose放在这里不太对啊,不是应该arising simultaneously with but吗?

that 从句中的主语 是 society, 谓语是 arose。我第一开始把 谓语看成了 administered,发现解释不通。有位亲解释得很清楚,给你链接哈http://forum.chasedream.com/foru ... ;extra=#pid17982761
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发表于 2014-7-19 21:25:31 | 只看该作者
我感觉E这个arose放在这里不太对啊,不是应该arising simultaneously with but吗?
地板
发表于 2013-7-8 23:13:03 | 只看该作者
半夏死磕GT 发表于 2013-7-8 22:23
后面加了一个but是什么意思啊?

but是并列连接simultaneously和independently的
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-8 22:23:01 | 只看该作者
HarrisZheng 发表于 2013-7-8 18:07
arise是不及物动词 句子的意思是  xxx 与 yyy 同时兴起  所以 对于D的解释就是xxx arising simultaneously  ...

后面加了一个but是什么意思啊?
沙发
发表于 2013-7-8 18:07:57 | 只看该作者
arise是不及物动词 句子的意思是  xxx 与 yyy 同时兴起  所以 对于D的解释就是xxx arising simultaneously with yyy 这个with不能少
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