SC新人贴，望各G友不吝指教，共同进步，突破700~

welchwan

CDERs，大家好。首先祝大家早日实现梦想。

我是SC新人，在阅读了几篇好贴后，开始自己的SC长征。先从OG13开始。昨天做了4个题，还是有不解之处。请各位指教。

OG13  1.

正确句子：

In a review of 2,000 studies of humanbehavior that date back to the 1940s, two Swiss psychologists declared thatsince most of the studies had failed to control for variables such as socialclass and family size, none could be taken seriously.

结构分析疑问

第一个逗号前没问题。

两个逗号之间的句子，psychologists declared that 已经是个完整句了吧。

那么，做后面的none could be taken seriously又是一个独立句子的话，是不是就不合理了？

OG13  2.

正确句子：Manufacturers rate batteries in watt-hours;the higher the watt-hour rating, the longer the battery can be expected tolast.

Rate的发起者是不是Manufactures呢？如果修饰thewatt-hour为什么不用 rated？

谢谢！

welchwan

心情日志。

2013年8月18日，凌晨3点27分。身在非洲大地。

刚刚做完OG13TH十个CR，逻辑是难题，但是自身的硬伤在于BASIC READING COMPREHENSION，完全读不懂英文，包括题干和选项。但是，我认为这些只是现状。我会攻克难关。

谨记~

welchwan

心情日志。


每天坚持看书到2点，进度很慢。好在没有停止。这周可以一刷manhattan sc了。

加油！

welchwan

继续求助。

OG SC 正确句子

108. Authoritative parents aremore likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents areself-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

本题错误选项B的说明没看明白。
B.Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissiveparents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high inself-esteem, and responsibly independent.
求指教。


126.Theuse of lie detectors is based on the assumption that lying produces emotionalreactions in an individual that, in turn, create unconscious physiologicalresponses.

本题错误选项E的说明没看明白。
E. who creates unconscious physiologicalresponses in turn

求指教。

welchwan

Laurielin 发表于 2013-7-11 20:13
hi ~~我又来了~最近效率好低~希望我能尽快恢复吧~

19

非常感谢你。

第44句，暴露了自己的硬伤。对单词词义的理解很不充分。不知道center这个词还有动词的释义。窥豹一斑，查漏补缺。

再谢！加油！

Laurielin

welchwan 发表于 2013-7-7 11:36
没人搭理我啊~~~难道要去占用资源开新帖？？不过，先写下一题。

OG SC  正确句子

hi ~~我又来了~最近效率好低~希望我能尽快恢复吧~

19
注意比较对象不是exploits和phisleas fogg 而是 circling the globe 和 phisleas fogg (前者faster than后者)
47 这个句子是这样的
主语 Alexander pope
谓语 began
宾语 histranslation of the ILIAD
a work  THAT...and THAT 为上述宾语的同位语从句,全部都是对WORK（也就是Iliad）的描述
44
主语 The plot
谓语 centers On
宾语 rivalry
that后面引导定语从句
大意是The Bostonians的情节中心在于OC BR之间的竞争

不知道有没有帮到你，楼主在职不容易，加油啊~坚持！

welchwan

没人搭理我啊~~~难道要去占用资源开新帖？？不过，先写下一题。

OG SC  正确句子
47. In 1713, Alexander Pope began histranslation of the Iliad, a work thattook him seven years to complete and that literary critic Smauel Johnson, Pope’scontemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language.

黄色部分在句子中是什么成分？为什么要有个that引导？

OG SC  正确句子

44.The plot (情节) of The Bostonians centers on the rivalrythat develops between Olive Chancellor, an active feminist, and Basil Ransom,her charming and cynical cousin, when they find themselves drawn to thesame radiant young woman whose talent for public speaking has won her an ardentfollowing.

没找到主句谓语。真愁人。。。。。求指教。

welchwan

请教！

OG SC

19.        正确句子是
The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne’s fictional Phileas Fogg.

疑问：the exploits 怎么可以和一个任务Phileas Fogg去比较呢？

than，前后比较的内容应该是一致的啊？！

welchwan

小别10天回归。在职伤不起。
从今起坚持准备。哪怕只看一道题。

COME ON!!!

welchwan

Laurielin 发表于 2013-6-19 23:31
6 不要换，违背简洁的原则,rank主动能表达就不要用被动了。
7 这是介词短语形式，主语肯定是the intricate  ...

thx，
我在继续留心WHICH和THAT的异同，以后分享。