针对OG13里的题目，在问一道哈!

云游

#19. A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploit included circling the globe faster than Jule Verne’s fictional Phileas Fogg.


A. A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploit included
B. The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
C. Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
D. Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly’s exploit are
E. The pioneer journalist’s exploits of Nellie Bly, included

这道题选B是没有什么问题的，只是对OG中D的解释有些疑问。
OG中的解释是：
"Since the event clearly happend in the past, the tense of verb 'are' is wrong; piling too many descriptive words for...makes the phrase unwieldy and awkward."
Ok, then. 我的问题主要是关于前半部分的解释。我排除D选项，是先看到一个Included in....are...的一个倒装结构，之后去看are后面跟着的主语"circling the globe faster than..."，显然是一个单数的成分。因此，根据主谓一致将are改成了is.
而根据OG中的解释，are是因为时态问题才排除的！而且说是因为这个exploit是clearly发生在过去，所以不能用一般现在时。可是我很想知道这样一种表达， Making the electric light bulb is included in Edison's top ten inventions.（虽然这个表达也有点奇怪）是不是在时态上也有问题呢？就是因为Making是发生在过去的，所以这边一定是要用"was"?
希望有走过的CDer们能够指点一下，谢谢了哈！

云游

那么激动啊，只不过解释上有不明白的地方，拿出来和大家讨论讨论吧~

xuzhuo8837863

CD里的人都怎么了？走火入魔了么…还有人说OG错了。难道一句话有几个错误，人家og指出一个错误排除之不行啊！！！感觉cd已经自我良好到高于GMAC出题机构了

thirdwheel

OG错了  应该是改成is

正过来说就是 circling the globe faster than Jule Verne’s fictional Phileas Fogg is included