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[Essay] Kellogg今年的leadership essay故事必须选多个嘛?

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发表于 2012-10-11 23:37:21 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
     What have been your mostsignificant leadership experiences? What challenges did you face, and whatimpact did you have? This is your opportunity to explain how you Think Bravely(personally and/or professionally). (500 word limit)
这个题目,网上有分析说,题目里experiences是复数,所以最好写2-3个leadership story。但是我想想觉得500字写两个story对我来说有点难。不知道达人怎么看这个题目的,能只写一个story么?
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发表于 2012-12-2 14:17:28 | 只看该作者
我问过adcom,写一个两个都可以。中介说的不一定全对。
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发表于 2012-11-26 12:31:28 | 只看该作者
我写了两个,字数非常不够
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发表于 2012-10-18 12:08:29 | 只看该作者
我就写了一个故事,但是从两个时间段的挑战来写的,不管了,已经交了
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发表于 2012-10-18 12:02:08 | 只看该作者
Good question!
I would suggest writing at least TWO. Because really of PRIMARY importance in all schools and in all essay questions is to follow the instructions! So if they ask for “stories” in plural, you need to give them stories. And if they ask for “AN experience” you need to give them only one. After all, in these essays, your main challenge is to follow whatever instructions they give and using these limitations, to show them that you are an AWESOME candidate. And it may seem hard at this point to get out TWO leadership stories in 500 words, but actually 500 words can be quite a lot. The important thing is to keep to the point.

A small tip for you: Leave out the introductions. START with the main PROBLEM or challenge. If you do this, you get STRAIGHT into the story from the very beginning. It helps you first of all, write a MUCH more exciting story, and secondly, helps you save a LOT of wordspace!

Jon Frank
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发表于 2012-10-16 11:08:37 | 只看该作者
我写了两个,第一个稍长,第二个稍短
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-16 00:49:08 | 只看该作者
     What have been your mostsignificant leadership experiences? What challenges did you face, and whatimpact did you have? This is your opportunity to explain how you Think Bravely(personally and/or professionally). (500 word limit)
这个题目,网上有分析说,题目里experiences是复数,所以最好写2-3个leadership story。但是我想想觉得500字写两个story对我来说有点难。不知道达人怎么看这个题目的,能只写一个story么?
-- by 会员 Pythagoras (2012/10/11 23:37:21)




要写2-3个。500字写2个绰绰有余。
-- by 会员 0250008 (2012/10/15 1:48:09)



多谢大牛指点!
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发表于 2012-10-15 01:48:09 | 只看该作者
     What have been your mostsignificant leadership experiences? What challenges did you face, and whatimpact did you have? This is your opportunity to explain how you Think Bravely(personally and/or professionally). (500 word limit)
这个题目,网上有分析说,题目里experiences是复数,所以最好写2-3个leadership story。但是我想想觉得500字写两个story对我来说有点难。不知道达人怎么看这个题目的,能只写一个story么?
-- by 会员 Pythagoras (2012/10/11 23:37:21)



要写2-3个。500字写2个绰绰有余。
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发表于 2012-10-13 01:16:11 | 只看该作者
完全同意楼上。experiences是一件事多面
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发表于 2012-10-12 23:26:13 | 只看该作者
建议写一个事情中的不同方面

也就是说一个故事 不同的环节 不同的侧面

做一件事 体现不同的领导才能 这是很常见的
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发表于 2012-10-12 21:32:39 | 只看该作者
怎么着,kellogg的essay题也当成GMAT语法来出了?如果只写一个会不会被认为是智商有问题而直接干掉?
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