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请教高人,一道OG上面的例题,谢谢

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发表于 2012-9-30 10:45:20 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
OG12,P663,33,原句是because an oversupply of computer chips has sent prices plunging, the manufacturer has announced that it will cut production by closing its factories for two days a month.


逗号前面的那句话就是选项A,也是正确答案,
但是D选项,due to plunging computer chip prices from an oversupply,答案说错在this backward discrip of the events behind the annoucement of factory closing is confusing and awkward.


读了无数遍,还是不觉的awkward,请高人赐教,不胜感激!
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发表于 2012-11-27 14:33:00 | 只看该作者
DE 用了due to只能做形容词,因此改变含义,成了adj phrase做initial n modifier 修饰manufacturer。
-- by 会员 yakev6 (2012/11/26 11:11:46)



同意,所以造成了句意的混乱。
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发表于 2012-11-26 23:08:13 | 只看该作者
due to在这里应该作表语吧
地板
发表于 2012-11-26 11:11:46 | 只看该作者
DE 用了due to只能做形容词,因此改变含义,成了adj phrase做initial n modifier 修饰manufacturer。
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发表于 2012-9-30 11:44:42 | 只看该作者
When "Due to" is used as "caused by", D makes grammatical sense but A sounds more logical to me because

A says that an "Oversupply" in the market will force the company to shut down production for 2 days, while D says that plunging prices will force the company to shut down production.

However, A has a "present perfect" problem. Clearly oversupply precedes manufacturer announcement, i don't think we can use 2 "has" here.

I will go with A because it is marginally more logical
-- by 会员 HerringtonD (2012/9/30 11:25:57)



the present perfect is legally used here


since you have a cause-and-effect relationship ,you don't need to use different tense to clarify the sequence;obviously,the cause happened first and then the effect


both happened in the past and relevant to the current topic,so perfect tense is needed here
沙发
发表于 2012-9-30 11:25:57 | 只看该作者
When "Due to" is used as "caused by", D makes grammatical sense but A sounds more logical to me because

A says that an "Oversupply" in the market will force the company to shut down production for 2 days, while D says that plunging prices will force the company to shut down production.

However, A has a "present perfect" problem. Clearly oversupply precedes manufacturer announcement, i don't think we can use 2 "has" here.

I will go with A because it is marginally more logical
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