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With the development of economy and technology, there is a growing number of people attend college or university. In my opinion, the major reasons of studying in college are career preparation, social connecting and eye-opening.

First of all, most people attend college or university because they would like to get a better job with a high paying. To be honest, according to the survey by China Daily which is one of the most famous newspaper in China, 80 percents of the student desire to get a good job so that make a lot more money after graduating from college.

For instance, my brother would like to be a layer as my father does, so he made a choice to study the low in the Ningbo University which is pretty famous in China for low studying. Finally my dear brother reached his goal and as a layer, he is now busying helping my father coping with plenty cases.

Then the next most important reason of college entering is to get a wider social web, especially for the ones who are expected to take part in commerce, like trading tasks, business gays and so on. To tell the truth, social connecting is so important for economic learners, like business man or woman, and it is also for other jobs like layer, journalists and designers. In the college, people make a lot of friends while living a colorful college life. Because of the nesserity of relationship in China, we study in university.

What’s more, eye-opening is also one of the points in my response. We meeting things while enjoying our college time, also we learning things while dealing with problems. So that we will see a increasing number a different situations, and our eyes are opening.

In a word, career preparing, getting a better social relationship and eye-opening are my 3 main reason of entering colleges. And people are getting closer and closer to their goals if they are considerable and wisdom enough to make the choice that attending university.

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Topic：
People attend college or university for many reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge.) Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and example to support you answer.