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8月19日

Do you agree or dis agree, the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/her personality or charactor?

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Have you ever seen some guy dressing in some smart suit and felt he is so optimistic? Have you ever met someone in the street wearing a dirty shirt that seems to be worn for years and wondered he must be very lazy and have a room in mass. I suppose you have and I always felt this way. Even though I can't judge a person from his/her appearance, I still can get to know something about his/her personality from what I've seen. So, I totally agree that the way a person dressed is a good indication of one's personality.

First and foremost, the appearance of people is how they perceive themselves, how they perceive life and how they perceive the world around them. A passionate person tends to dress himself with colorful clothes, cause he thinks that colorful clothes denote his personality and that he just don't want to be overlooked by the world. Obviously, we may meet one person with colorful clothes and feel his passion the moment we see him. On the contrary, if a person is always sad and gloom, and feel disappointed about the life he is living, chances are that he will never wear anything colorful and instead will wear some dark-colored clothes most of the time. As we can judge most of the time, people dressed such way may have a personality more negative. Since the way you perceive the life and the world help you develop various personalities, and the personality directly affects the way you dress yourself, I can simply learn about your personality by the way you dress yourself.

Moreover, the way how people dress themselves is the way how people tell others about themselves. Since most of us cannot always get a chance to go out for coffee and talk with each other about each other' personality, we simply obtain something about others' personality through what we see at the sight. As for officers, they want to be outstanding at work, so they just wear shirt and tie everyday, showing that they are professional and ready and also able to handle any tasks that have been handed over to them. Likewise, the actress always dress themselves with most newly designed fashions and shiny accessories by which they want to show the audiences that they care about the feelings of audiences and they want to be well prepared to perform perfectly. So, how you dress indicates what you want to show others about yourselves.

Last but not the least, the way people dress themselves contains crucial information they want express to others, and people care about the quality of information delivered to others. Since people with different personalities find distinct styles of clothes to match the information they wants to deliver, we receive various information rightly in accordance with their personalities. Whenever you see a police officer, he must be dressed with clean and tidy uniforms without any wrinkles, because he want you to receive the information he has delivered that he is serious and cautious about his job and ready to fight against any crimes. Totally, he wants to claim with what he dresses that he is the man of justice.

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