叶子的作文贴

E月羽

综合写作

bonfin

9.16 独立诶~

safeandsound

膜拜一下大侠、、发现被赤裸裸的鄙视了、、让我情何以堪啊、、

E月羽

9月15日独立
Whether university professors should focus on the education of students or researches? It might be tempting to back professors invest more time and energy in educating instead of researching. However, given to chance, I think the formula ought to be reversed. Granted, the students play a crucial role in future development of a nation. Still, researches in various spheres form the bases for a social rapid development.
First of all, Researches are of great important for our life. Countless scientific achievement, which has always accompanied with the progress and revolution of the society, definitely, relevant to a multitude of experimental researches conducting by professors and researchers. The invention of the stream engine brought a new era of prosperity of world society; the employment of electricity has multiplied the productivity and virtually reproduced limited resources on the earth. By the same token, the innovation of computer technology has made the Earth a little village and connected distant countries as a single Market. Apparently, we cannot emphasis the important of researcher too much.
Furthermore, It is likewise that technology will exert more far-reaching effect on the mind of students. No matter whatever the result is, a processing of a research often accompanied with rapidly accumulation of cut-edging knowledge to the professor, which directly reflected in their teaching courses. When referring to a sort of concept or points associating with one of research, it is evitable that professor brings into their incisive opinions and advanced knowledge. Even though most are too profound to understand, it also plants a scientific seed in student mind, waiting to germinate one days.
Given the understanding , it is difficult to overratethe connection between research and education. Admittedly, it can not be ignore that schooling of students imparted by professor is one of the vital feature of social development. Nevertheless, in many cases, the accomplishments hail from scores of research conducted by professors could facilitate the schooling of university. For example, technology has offered students with easy access to academic databases via I pad screen. Read classical literature masterpieces or watch historical documents on internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for many courses. This kind of case is not rare. Thus, we can draw a conclusion that researches greatly benefit the education in college.

To sum up, the professor’s time should be occupied by a plenty of research. For these reasons mentioned above, it is incorrect to place education significant above that of researches

羊咩咩yw

Have you ever watched the American opera” gossip girl” via internet? (我觉得Gossip girl 电视剧用在这里不太合适呢，要不换成Modern Family 你觉得怎么样？要不网络课程也行~~个人意见呢，呵呵~)Have you ever been encouraged to learn basketball even though you are a girl? Have you felt happiness and satisfied since you paid the tuition fee by your scholarship? If you have never had these experiences, you would not know how easy can we get education in today society due to the development of technology, assistance of government as well as the change of social attitude.（楼主~其实我觉得这个开头结构用的人很多~~这样容易重复，小建议哈~~）

It is well known that technology has been advanced significantly since last century, which leads to great improvement in our education resources and means. Given the past, if students wanted to learn foreign language such as English, directly emulating the pronunciation of teacher is the only way in that there were no equipment for them to listen to English tapes and no foreign teachers to talk with. However, with the advent of internet and various electronic equipments, such as IPAD, MP4, students can easily gain access to a huge amount of English materials, which handily prepare them with the key knowledge they need in the future. it is impossible for us to emphasis the important of technology too much, when it comes to the quality and availability of education.

Apart from advanced technology, the assistance from society and government also play a crucial role in improvement of education. For those who had difficult （difficulty） being educated for the sake of finance problem, governmental authorities and colleges have provided various welfare programs to help them. With plenty of opportunities to acquired scholarship and subsidies, students are more likely to finish their education. In addition, the popularization of compulsory education offers more chances to those who are eager to received education but cannot affords the expensive tuition fees. It is the sound welfare system of government and some institution in today society guarantees the availability of schooling to more people than in the past.

Last but not least, change in attitude toward education, especially for women, considerable urges the education pervasion. This obviously reflected in the fact that the increasing number of female are active in the social stage. (我觉得在后面加一个和题目联系起来的句子会更扣题~~)In the ancient of China, girls who wanted to get education were often regarded as traitorous. They were forbidden by their parents to touching any books so that most of they were not literate at all. Compared with them, women nowadays are able to attend school as well as man without gender discrimination from parents and society.

To sum up, I agree with the statement that people are now easier to become educated today than in the past because many aspects of our society have largely improved to relatively high level, which are more likely to satisfied the needs of people who seek the chance of education and self-enhancement.


我觉得LZ的句子写得很好~观点也很不错，加油~~

E月羽

9月14日独立

Have you ever watched the American opera” gossip girl” via internet? Have you ever been encouraged to learn basketball even though you are a girl? Have you felt happiness and satisfied since you paid the tuition fee by your scholarship? If you have never had these experiences, you would not know how easy can we geteducation in today society due to the development of technology, assistance of government as well as the change of social attitude.

It is well known that technology has been advanced significantly since last century, which leads to great improvement in our education resources and means. Given the past, if students wanted to learn foreign language such as English, directly emulating the pronunciation of teacher is the only way in that there were no equipment for them to listen to English tapes and no foreign teachers to talk with. However, with the advent of internet and various electronic equipments, such as IPAD, MP4, students can easily gain access to a huge amount of English materials, which handily prepare them with the key knowledge they need in the future. it is impossible for us to emphasis the important of technology too much, when it comes to the quality and availability of education.

Apart from advanced technology, the assistance from society and government also play a crucial role in improvement of education. For those who had difficult being educated for the sake of finance problem, governmental authorities and colleges have provided various welfare programs to help them. With plenty of opportunities to acquired scholarship and subsidies, students are more likely to finish their education. In addition, the popularization of compulsory education offers more chances to those who are eager to received education but cannot affords the expensive tuition fees. It is the sound welfare system of government and some institution in today society guarantees the availability of schooling to more people than in the past.

Last but not least, change in attitude toward education, especially for women, considerable urges the education pervasion. This obviously reflected in the fact that the increasing number of female are active in the social stage. In the ancient of China, girls who wanted to get education were often regarded as traitorous. They were forbidden by their parents to touching any books so that most of they were not literate at all. Compared with them, women nowadays are able to attend school as well as man without gender discrimination from parents and society.

To sum up, I agree with the statement that people are now easier to become educated today than in the past because many aspects of our society have largely improved to relatively high level, which are more likely to satisfied the needs of people who seek the chance of education and self-enhancement.

E月羽

9月13日独立

Have you ever gotten tons of desirable job hunting information from some special courses? Have you even adopting various interview skill taught by teachers to win the work opportunity in the fierce job market? Have you ever appreciated the preparation courses offered by university when you acquire the chance of advancement? If you have never had these experiences, you would never know how crucial the preparation courses are. In my opinion, before student enter into social competition, the preparation course is imperative.

First, preparation courses provide a platform for student to acquire guidance of work. Students needs guidance from teachers, since their do not have an overall understanding of the work they are going to engage in. This means, before being faced with drastic competitions, students could have no blueprints for their futures. Just as a kid who is for the first time in a swimming pool could do nothing but to play with water. Therefore, it is impossible to overstate the important of courses too much. By this special course, knowledgeable teachers could give desirable recommendation that allow student to explore what sorts of job they are best suited to in terms of their skills and personality.

Furthermore, offering a preparation course is a better way for students to learn how to employ the academic knowledge into their routine works. The mainly aim of university is to make students comprehend the knowledge of their major field systematically to form a whole-scale prospect, which lead the increasing number of graduate are “the giant of thought, and the dwarf of action”. An investigation conducted in 2012 revealed the surprising factors that many students pass examinations by relying on nothing more than rote memorization.

There should therefore be courses that help student transform the knowledge in mind into the capacity of action by providing the opportunities of action. Such as teaching a biological student learn how to conduct an experience by using academic information. The more internship and training graduate have, the more academic knowledge can be master by student.

In addition, not only the guidance of job occupation but also the other desirable skills should be offered by college. Today, the majority of teachers and students laid too much emphasis on the scores, only few cares about other abilities which are also essential for students' future success. For example, while major courses may occasionally utilize teamwork skills for group activities in class, does it really benefit for students career? Last year, a shocking news comes out, a Tsing Hua university graduate sells the pork meat alone in the farm market to make a living, the top-A students cannot hold a job for more than two month because "He does not possess social abilities" form one of his ex-boss. To give a better hand for their students in the future job market, the university, arranging the course to improve cooperation skill is imperative.

To sum up, Considering that job preparation is closely related to students’ development, it is impossible to emphasis the important of offering job courses in college too much. As the Abraham Lincon address: I will prepare and some day my chance will come.

总感觉每段的废话太多，麻烦指正。后来自己有重写了一下2，3 段，麻烦对比一下，那种比较好。

1 帮助学生更好的规划未来。

The plan of occupation is of important for the every stage of student. To help students to depict brilliant blueprints of themselves, it is crucial for the university to arrange special job courses, which could benefits student a lots. These courses should not only provide the detailed job hunting information but also give them the most suitable recommendations for career, according to their various situations, by which all of them will have an overall understanding of their occupation. Only in this way can bring the student a splendid future.

2 帮助学生知识和技能更好的融合。

No matter what the student majors in the university, he or she need to employ the academic knowledge acquired into their routine works. Generally, it is a long period that the students transform theory into practice with the accumulation of experience. If university could offering relevant course and arrange the chance of internship to forge their ability of action, this process could be accelerates. Therefore, their more easily got the win during the fierce competition of job, since it is quicker to them to familiar with the operation of the companies by skilled using theoretical knowledge into tasks.

E月羽

谢谢dunia 同学的批改，

duniaguodupa

913综合
According to the reading passage, the writer puts forward three measures to preserve the population of the Torreya, a kind of tree. However, the professor argues that none of methods are satisfied solution. She uses three pieces of reason to buttress her opinion.



The speaker refutes the first approach in the reading-----reestablishing Torreya in the original site. She points out that recently, Being affected by the great environment, the microclimate is no longer suitable to the Torreya survival. Not only the global warming but also the drying the wetland lead to the niche become warmer and drier than before（此句要倒装，not only do······；另外lead to the niche become·····也有问题）, which eliminate the condition of Torreya to relocate in the same place.



In addition, on contrary to the statement in the passage that moving Torreya to an totally various place is an effective way to address the decline of Torrya. The professor claims that this method will cause another question. For example, the same measure once was taken to protect another kind of rare tree BL. The tree spread quickly and kills surrounding tree species, which were endangered. Therefore, Torreya cannot be planted into the new environment.



Furthermore, the narrator argues that to preserve Torreya in research centers cannot ensure the continued survival of the species, which（is） different from what states by author. She alleges that the stability of population of Torreya cannot be guaranteed since trees lived in the centers cannot resist the diseases. To be specific, two a request---- large and genetic diversity, play crucial roles in trees survival.To the tree, Living in wild can satisfied these condition. However, for the sake of absence of genetic diversity, the tree cannot growth well in centers.


楼主真心厉害，内容都能听出来了！而且文章也能表现出passage和lecture的不同。
存在极少的语法小错误，但无伤大雅。ym楼主~

E月羽

9月13日综合

According to the reading passage, the writer puts forward three measures to preserve the population of the Torreya, a kind of tree. However, the professor argues that none of methods are satisfied solution. She uses three pieces of reason to buttress her opinion.

The speaker refutes the first approach in the reading-----reestablishing Torreya in the original site. She points out that recently, Being affected by the great environment, the microclimate is no longer suitable to the Torreya survival. Not only the global warming but also the drying the wetland lead to the niche become warmer and drier than before, which eliminate the condition of Torreya to relocate in the same place.

In addition, on contrary to the statement in the passage that moving Torreya to an totally various place is an effective way to address the decline of Torrya. The professor claims that this method will cause another question. For example, the same measure once was taken to protect another kind of rare tree BL. The tree spread quickly and kills surrounding tree species, which were endangered. Therefore, Torreya cannot be planted into the new environment.

Furthermore, the narrator argues that to preserve Torreya in research centers cannot ensure the continued survival of the species, which different from what states by author. She alleges that the stability of population of Torreya cannot be guaranteed since trees lived in the centers cannot resist the diseases. To be specific, two a request---- large and genetic diversity, play crucial roles in trees survival.To the tree, Living in wild can satisfied these condition. However, for the sake of absence of genetic diversity, the tree cannot growth well in centers.