呼仔的作文帖！求指导！握拳！有口语建议也进来呀！

lemonyhu

超级纠结的一个==
两次托都93！！
作文倒是稍微从22到25~！
希望大家帮忙啊！
另外有什么口语的经验一定传授给我啊！！
一直19不想活了！！！
期待口语小分队！

小兔爱twins

The lecturer claims that if companies offer their employees with （ 注意！offer sb sth

或者offer sth for sb ）a four-day work week, theywon't get the satisfied result mentioned in thepassage. This claim is not in accordance with that of the reading, which arguesthat the four-day week would not only benefit the economy but also theindividual companies and employees.（这表达的有点太啰嗦了 paraphrase的功力要加强）

Firstly, the writer mentions that the shortenedworkweek would increase company profits becauseemployees would make fewer mistakes. However, the lecturer explains thatcompanies would spend more since they need to hire more employees. As a result,companies should spend money on their training and medical insurance. Besides,extra office spaces and computers are also necessary for their（这里的their指谁?） working.

Secondly, by contending that offering a four-dayweek would not reduce unemployment rate at all, the lecturer refutes theviewpoint mentioned in the reading passage. He further points out thatcompanies will ask employees to work overtime instead of employing new workloads. More importantly, employers may expect employers to finish their five-day tasks within fourdays. Therefore, the current situation at work would create negative emotionamong employees.

Last but not least, considering the third point, the option of a four-day workweek would improve the quality of employees' life, the lecturer also holds controversial opinion. He mentions that employees who choose to work four days a week would suffer from this policy. Not only the employees’ status but also their careers would be harmed. People who work four-days are more likely to lose their jobs. What’s more, even the chance for promotion will be little because companies want people who can be consistent supervision for the entire five-days.
听力点都到了。。。但是 总觉得整篇文章在表述上面怪怪的

陈喵喵holdon

看到楼主前面写的 作文25 口语19 总分93 那阅读听力不错啊！求阅读的方法....

陈喵喵holdon

827独立know a person from type of friends that he has,agree or disagree



Will people get to know other people according to the type of friends that they make? People’s opinions are different toward this complex question. Some people assert that we prefer to make friends with similar characteristics. Others hold that it is impossible to recognize a person from his friends. As far as I am concerned, for most people, we can tell their personality from their friends.



In the first place, as human beings, we are more likely to get positive feedback from people around us. So a friend in need is a friend who shares the same value with me(感觉时而we时而me的). According to a(an) investigation conducted by Sohu, one of the famous websites in China, when asked about which kind of friends do you(总觉得人称和读者的立场有点乱)need, 70% of the people chose to make friends with similar personality. Only less than 10% people answered that they would like to seek for friends who have the opposite point of view(同样的观点和同样的personality感觉有点不对等). Why do they want to make similar friends? The reason is that people look forward to get(look forward to doing)the positive feedback from others. If friends have a lot in common, then they can become soulmate and discuss everything, big or small, together. It is also comfortable to be with people alike.



In the second place, we can get familiar to(get familiar with)a person from his friends also because they bring us the sense of secure(security,还有这句话意思好像有点不对，我们可以通过他的朋友来熟悉这个人？你是想表达一个人和他的朋友熟悉吧？). That is to say, getting along with them, there is no need for us to always worry about our words might make others unhappy. To further illustrate my view, I will use my experience as an example. I have two best friends, Jane, who shares similar attitude toward almost everything. We chat together and hang out every week. Hardly ever have we quarreled with each other because we understand each others’ mind. On the other hand（另外一个朋友用这个短语好像不恰当), Jessica, another friend of mine, always angry at me for little things because she has totally opposite characters. I am quiet but she is straight and outgoing. Therefore, I found it hard to balance our friendship because we always hurt each other unintentionally. From my instance above, I will say that I would like to make friends with people alike so that it is easy to tell my character from the friend I make.



Admittedly, some people would like to make friends of all kinds. Friends who share different point(points) of view can complement their characteristics. Also, similar friends could be their soulmate and share lots of topics(跟前面的points有点重复). Nevertheless, I believe most are likely to choose the later choice.(没有例子?)



In all, this is a complex question, requiring an all-around analysis. And only can we make friends with shared value toward life as well as others can we find someone to talk to while do not need to worry too much.(最后是不是应该再点上从朋友上判断一个人这个主题?)

-- by 会员 lemonyhu (2012/8/28 13:24:44)

第一点和第二点好像观点有点类似..例子除了第一个搜狐的以外感觉不是很有力..
前面感觉单句用的比较多,后面就复合句出现了..
感觉全文几乎就是在说挑跟自己像的人做朋友..论点有点单薄的感觉..

lemonyhu

827综合 TPO1
The lecturer claims that if companies offer their employees with a four-day work week, they won't get the satisfied result mentioned in the passage. This claim is not in accordance with that of the reading, which argues that the four-day week would not only benefit the economy but also the individual companies and employees.


Firstly, the writer mentions that the shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would make fewer mistakes. However, the lecturer explains that companies would spend more since they need to hire more employees. As a result, companies should spend money on their training and medical insurance. Besides, extra office spaces and computers are also necessary for their working.


Secondly, by contending that offering a four-day week would not reduce unemployment rate at all, the lecturer refutes the viewpoint mentioned in the reading passage. He further points out that companies will ask employees to work overtime instead of employing new workloads. More importantly, employers may expect employers to finish their five-day tasks within four days. Therefore, the current situation at work would create negative emotion among employees.


Last but not least, considering the third point, the option of a four-day workweek would improve the quality of employees' life, the lecturer also holds controversial opinion. He mentions that employees who choose to work four days a week would suffer from this policy. Not only the employees’ status but also their careers would be harmed. People who work four-days are more likely to lose their jobs. What’s more, even the chance for promotion will be little because companies want people who can be consistent supervision for the entire five-days.

lemonyhu

827独立know a person from type of friends that he has,agree or disagree



Will people get to know other people according to the type of friends that they make? People’s opinions are different toward this complex question. Some people assert that we prefer to make friends with similar characteristics. Others hold that it is impossible to recognize a person from his friends. As far as I am concerned, for most people, we can tell their personality from their friends.



In the first place, as human beings, we are more likely to get positive feedback from people around us. So a friend in need is a friend who shares the same value with me. According to a investigation conducted by Sohu, one of the famous websites in China, when asked about which kind of friends do you need, 70% of the people chose to make friends with similar personality. Only less than 10% people answered that they would like to seek for friends who have the opposite point of view. Why do they want to make similar friends? The reason is that people look forward to get the positive feedback from others. If friends have a lot in common, then they can become soulmate and discuss everything, big or small, together. It is also comfortable to be with people alike.



In the second place, we can get familiar to a person from his friends also because they bring us the sense of secure. That is to say, getting along with them, there is no need for us to always worry about our words might make others unhappy. To further illustrate my view, I will use my experience as an example. I have two best friends, Jane, who shares similar attitude toward almost everything. We chat together and hang out every week. Hardly ever have we quarreled with each other because we understand each others’ mind. On the other hand, Jessica, another friend of mine, always angry at me for little things because she has totally opposite characters. I am quiet but she is straight and outgoing. Therefore, I found it hard to balance our friendship because we always hurt each other unintentionally. From my instance above, I will say that I would like to make friends with people alike so that it is easy to tell my character from the friend I make.



Admittedly, some people would like to make friends of all kinds. Friends who share different point of view can complement their characteristics. Also, similar friends could be their soulmate and share lots of topics. Nevertheless, I believe most are likely to choose the later choice.



In all, this is a complex question, requiring an all-around analysis. And only can we make friends with shared value toward life as well as others can we find someone to talk to while do not need to worry too much.

lemonyhu

谢谢楼上哈~我说人怎么没了呢！

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With the magnificent development of the modern society, there is a heated(hot好点，heated表示变化，不表状态，稍有问题) debate over whether people should review the past in order to solve the problems of the present and future. People's opinions are different toward this complex question. Some people hold that there is no need to review the history behind. Others think it is essential （for people）删 to stop and look back. As far as I am concerned, we should apply to不好 the history and look back.


In the first place, reviewing history will remind us to be consciousness（动词原形 be conscious of）to the success and failure. As Zhuangzi, (最好举国外例子，美国人批作文，可能他们的例子好些)one of the most famous philosophers单数 once said:" Nothing great was ever achieved without the action of introspection". When we are confronting with difficulties, we should review the history and find the best solution. When we are experiencing success, we should look back and never overestimate ourselves. When we made mistakes, given the opportunity to review the history enables us to find the cause of the mistakes as well as作也连接两部分的话不太确切 learn from the past faults. Therefore, History prevents people from making the same mistake in the future and provide us with the chance to improve our own ability.


Furthermore, past experience will build our confidence and encourage us to beat the challenges. To further illustrate my viewpoint, i will use my experience as an example. When I was in middle school, I finished a presentation related to marketing and won a first class prize. By the time I entered college, I received a similar competition. Even though I have never done any work in this topic,这句话没理解I can still be confident and get ready for competing with other counterparts.这个例子有些不劳而获的思想，不是太正面。 My past experience provides me not only with the experience but also the confidence to myself.


Admittedly, some past experiences are not available nowadays since the high speed of the development of ###某某的高速发展，让经验在今天不适合. The only work people can do is to face the new challenges and try their utmost to innovate a brain-new solution. During this process, people will learn more knowledge可以删 than they can envision. Nevertheless, in most（many of） cases, people still need to refer to（查阅；有关；
有关；适用于；适用于；（把…）归因[功]于…（把…）归因[功]于…）（归功于？）past events.


All in all, this issue is a complex one, requiring an all-around analysis. For most（many） people, there is no denying that we need to combine our past experience with current situation, in order to figure out the best way to deal with the dilemma. Only by doing this, can people overcome the obstacles and learn from the past to strengthen their potential.搭配不好，比较少见。

sherryzhangh

Thelecturer claims that the reason why yellow cedars have been declining thesedays is not clear. Therefore（这个因果关系没有那么强烈，这个连词很怪异）, the reasons mentioned in the readingpassage are not adequate. This claim （这些指代都很混淆）is not in accordance with that of the reading passage,which raises three main reasons to explain the decline of the yellow cedar.

Firstly,the writer of the reading passage points out that insect parasites might beresponsible for the decline. However, the lecturer argues that in fact, yellowcedar is more resistant to insects than other tree species because its bark andleaves are poisonous to insects. He further explains that insects usuallyattack the yellow cedars that which aresick instead of the healthy ones.

Secondly,by contending that the population of yellow cedars is declining with or withoutbrown bears, the lecturer refutes the viewpoint in the passage.  Heexplains that yellow cedars are widely spread among Northern West Coast ofAmerica, including the main land and island. However, there is no decline inthe island. ( 这听错了， 应该是岛上没有棕熊， 可是yellow cedar 还是下降了， 这说明棕熊不是罪魁祸首)So wecannot conclude that brown bears are the cause of the decline.

Thirdly, considering the third point, the writerstates that gradual changes of climate may exert bad influence on thepopulation of yellow cedars. Nevertheless, the lecturer holds controversialpoint of view. He mentions that the writer forget to take into account someessential factors. If climate is responsible for the decline, then we willwitness more trees die at cold temperature with high elevations. On thecontrary, we can see lots of trees' death in warm areas with lower elevation.Hence, it is not fair to come into the statement that temperature is anothermain cause.

lemonyhu

825 In order to solve the problems of the present and the future, people should review the past.


With the magnificent development of the modern society, there is a heated debate over whether people should review the past in order to solve the problems of the present and future. People's opinions are different toward this complex question. Some people hold that there is no need to review the history behind. Others think it is essential for people to stop and look back. As far as I am concerned, we should apply to the history and look back.


In the first place, reviewing history will remind us to be consciousness to the success and failure. As Zhuangzi, one of the most famous philosophers once said:" Nothing great was ever achieved without the
action of introspection". When we are confronting with difficulties, we should review the history and find the best solution. When we are experiencing success, we should look back and never overestimate ourselves. When we made mistakes, given the opportunity to review the history enables us to find the cause of the mistakes as well as learn from the past faults. Therefore, History prevents people from making the same mistake in the future and provide us with the chance to improve our own ability.


Furthermore, past experience will build our confidence and encourage us to beat the challenges. To further illustrate my viewpoint, i will use my experience as an example. When I was in middle school, I finished a presentation related to marketing and won a first class prize. By the time I entered college, I received a similar competition. Even though I have never done any work in this topic, I can still be confident and get ready for competing with other counterparts. My past experience provides me not only with the experience but also the confidence to myself.


Admittedly, some past experiences are not available nowadays since the high speed of the development. The only work people can do is to face the new challenges and try their utmost to innovate a brain-new solution. During this process, people will learn more knowledge than they can envision. Nevertheless, in most cases, people still need to refer to past events.


All in all, this issue is a complex one, requiring an all-around analysis. For most people, there is no denying that we need to combine our past experience with current situation in order to figure out the best way to deal with the dilemma. Only by doing this, can people overcome the obstacles and learn from the past to strengthen their potential.