og13 132题 og解释疑惑（DE选项）有劳各位!

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Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year – they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises-heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.

A Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
B Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
C Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
D Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
E Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins

疑问1：og说D和E选项都是ungrammatical。”我不太明白，D、E的句子从语法上说貌似没错啊？

拜谢解答！

germain

jiaoguitar 发表于 2012-7-12 02:25
谢谢解答，可是想问下，你指的那两句run-on了？d选项就一个完整的句子的话，后面破折号连接应该是可以的 ...

同意！               

Indigolove

Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year – they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises-heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.

A. Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
B. Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
C. Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
D. Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
E. Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins



So D is out, E: Heirloom tomatoes, although..........weird, so E is out

A, C lack of comma, because of the using of the modifiers: heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year,

So we can only go with B

lwd891214

tsun9920 发表于 2013-8-14 22:12
关于although 的用法， 请参考Baby的回复 from ： http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-527959-1-1.html ...

感谢解惑,对于although用法一直有所疑惑,推荐大家有疑惑去原帖看看,原文很短.

nyndw

珊若小花 发表于 2013-6-30 23:45
这贴貌似很久了，正好看到。版主我觉得E不对主要是因为出现了双主语。诚如你说的H tomatoes后面的东西都 ...

赞！！！！我明白although为啥不能省略了！！！！

白糯米

白糯米 发表于 2013-9-12 07:45
可是中间有破折号，破折号不是可以连接俩个句子吗？难道是因为B项的句子结构更好吗？ ...

不好意思我看错了，这里有俩个破折号，是作为插入语，所以前面应该是个从句~

白糯米

jiaoguitar 发表于 2012-7-9 01:50
D选项是完整的句子，可后半句也是一个完整的句子，没有连接词，是run-on错误。E选项划线部分已经有两个主语 ...

可是中间有破折号，破折号不是可以连接俩个句子吗？难道是因为B项的句子结构更好吗？

elsachialee

dearivy 发表于 2013-8-14 22:37
可不可以请教一下，什么叫run on 句子？

A run-on is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses (i.e., complete sentences) are joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction.

eg1.
A run-on sentence, without any punctuation or conjunction between "gas" and "we": （句子木有逗号）
My car is out of gas we cannot reach town before dark.

eg2.
A comma splice, which is considered a run-on sentence in English by some usage experts:
It is nearly half past five, we cannot reach town before dark.
改正：
Use separate sentences. However, this may disconnect related independent clauses and cause some of the meaning to be lost:
It is nearly half past five. We cannot reach town before dark.
Use a semicolon. This maintains the connection between the clauses while ensuring a pause between the two ideas:
It is nearly half past five; we cannot reach town before dark.
Use a coordinating conjunction with a comma.
It is nearly half past five, so we cannot reach town before dark.

（wikipidea）

dearivy

珊若小花 发表于 2013-6-30 23:45
这贴貌似很久了，正好看到。版主我觉得E不对主要是因为出现了双主语。诚如你说的H tomatoes后面的东西都 ...

可不可以请教一下，什么叫run on 句子？

dearivy

jiaoguitar 发表于 2012-7-9 01:50
D选项是完整的句子，可后半句也是一个完整的句子，没有连接词，是run-on错误。E选项划线部分已经有两个主语 ...

这个解释很好。