OG13 一道语法题 求分析。！？

JustinL

Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year – they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises-heirlooms are more flavorful and thus in increasing demand.

A Although appearing less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
B Although heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
C Although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins, heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year
D Grown from seeds saved during the previous year, heirloom tomatoes appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins
E Heirloom tomatoes, grown from seeds saved during the previous year, although they appear less appetizing than most of their round and red supermarket cousins

答案选B 可以理解  哪位大牛能告诉我A,C 差别在哪里  错误在哪里？。

CoralUT

D没有转折，前后两句话就矛盾了呀，前面一句话说看起来不好吃，后面直接来一句其实是好吃的，中间大家不觉得差点啥吗

酒肆是也

DE选项均出现了其他主语，所以排除

yangyang2

同认为D选项没什么错误，破折号如果当做分号可以引导两个句子没什么错误啊

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lisa1009 发表于 2014-9-9 09:49
我也觉得D读者顺口，没什么太明显的原则错误。OG解释是说Grown from seeds这半句写在开头，显得太过重要 ...

我觉得D没有语法错误，只是在表达句意上不如有转折的句子。

本句强调H番茄看起来不怎么样，但是实际味道不错。然而读D项，D句前半句说，哦，H番茄看起来不如它的兄弟好吃，中间来了个破折号形容H番茄看起来是如何的不好，然没有一点点防备：说H番茄味道好所以需求量大。因此我觉得D的两句话（忽略Grown的修饰和破折号里的句子）中间是没有逻辑联系的。
欢迎指正

RaymondYC

其实好多人在说破折号中间的内容可以略去，其实破折号中间的内容才是解题的关键（能看懂的话） ，这个插入语they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises解释的是为什么这种番茄不如超市里的那些好吃，作为一个解释应该跟被解释内容里的尽量近一点。

yichenghaha

我觉得ACE是重复了主语  heirloom tomatoes和heirlooms  D是两个句子之间缺少连词

kisscedric

zixuan1017 发表于 2017-6-4 12:21
说说我的思路，请NN拍砖 我在分析这句话的时候。先把破折号部分去掉不看。再来分析句子成分。这样就只有B才 ...

Mark一下！               

自制加油gmat

帝殒0417 发表于 2017-6-29 06:35
非常同意。我刚开始也在纠结B或者D，因为他们两个都有完整的句子结构。无法排除D的原因在于Manhattan里说 ...

博主，你说如果破折号可以看作分号的话，两个破折号中间的they是错误的原因。为什么呢？？they不可以指代前面或者后面句子的名词吗？

帝殒0417

zixuan1017 发表于 2017-6-4 12:21
说说我的思路，请NN拍砖 我在分析这句话的时候。先把破折号部分去掉不看。再来分析句子成分。这样就只有B才 ...

非常同意。我刚开始也在纠结B或者D，因为他们两个都有完整的句子结构。无法排除D的原因在于Manhattan里说"-"可以作";"，但后来在想，两个dash中间的句子主语恰好是代词，如果把dash当做","，中间当成一整个插入语，那D明显就是两个independent没有conjunction。