ISSUE 82 球拍！ 这次真心写的要吐血了也也不上600字！求救呢！

fanny89757

Why does someone said the students in universities or colleges should be send out to study in a foreign country for  no less than a semester?Does this view improve the development of the students? In my view,the speaker emphasises the meaning of the educaiton of universities and colleges, however, the foreign study should be accomplished in limitations.

First and foremost, the meaning of education  of university is hardly to explain in a few sentence, however, on the side of a common student, it  is able to estabilish the ways for improving the abilities of oneself. Both the abilities of the body and the mantation.After the gradual of university, the students developed into a skillful people which the society need most. Therefore, the tasks of the students in universities are enhancing the ability of intelligent comprehension and boost  the ability of making  the knowledge  over utilized.Besides, the opputunity for a student to study in foreign contries is an efficient method for improving their capability in theory. It results in the culture of other countries is capable to stimulate the creative compacities of the students, even giving rise to their new discovery on their major field. However,the result about the speaker's view is only a kind of suggestion in theory, we may fail to be sure the cause about it in reality.

Such many differences between each country,that if the student go to study in other counties they cerntainly be benefit on a group of ascepts. On the facial side, the customs of life absolutly will be different. The customs of eating might become the first tough task for them. To overcome the whole difficulties of a new cultural environment, every winner will be rewarded a great number of skills which do not come from the books.Furthermore, the advantages of inspiriting their thought and set their bearing capacity in a strength stage. However,on the otherhand, if the student who has been sent to other country were idle everyday and be of extravagence without any limitation. Why should the univertisy give it a semester to waste in other place? No one is ensure that it would not idle in some area if they feel relaxed there which comes to the disadvantages of this idea.

To solute the lackness of the speaker's view, in my point of view, the unviersities is better to preserve  the idea of studying in other countries at least one year as a reward, so do the colleges. It accentuated the significance of this learning trip, meanwhile improved the production of the researches in the universities because  the elite were going to absorb the accomplishment of others and share it  after the year.This reward represent a limitation about the adle students when decreasing the expense of the universities.

这个issue我写了1小时20分钟，写的真的要疯掉了也才458个字
另外求救一下例子~这个主题我就怎么都想不出来例子~这个咋办？！

竹林中人

对于不好写的文章，你不必坚持自己的真实想法，而可以选择自己认为好写的观点，写AW并不是看你的真实想法是咋样的，而是看你怎么论证你的想法的，跟你的想法是否真是无关，所以尽量选择自己觉得好写的思路吧，即使你不这么认为。

普渡哥

Such many differences between each country,that if the student go to study in other counties they cerntainly be benefit on a group of ascepts.

Such应该换成so。。

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