OG12-9求助。。

qiuhua01234567 · 发表于 2012-3-1 18:38:42

Like the idolization accorded the Brontës and Brownings, James Joyce and Virginia Woolf are often subjected to the kind of veneration that blurs the distinction between the artist and the human being.
(A) Like the idolization accorded the Brontës and
Brownings,
(B) As the Brontës’ and Brownings’ idolization,
(C) Like that accorded to the Brontës and Brownings,
(D) As it is of the Brontës and Brownings,
(E) Like the Brontës and Brownings,
答案很清楚了。。但是OG有一句话是这么写的： as it is of is awkward and wordy。awkward在哪了？wordy在哪了？

bank11 · 发表于 2012-3-20 17:14:44

这样来看~
James Joyce and Virginia Woolf are often subjected to the kind of veneration是主句，as it is of 中的 it 唯一可以指代的是the kind，而这个指代造成了比较对象的不对等而且不合逻辑所以是awkward
open to discuss~

qiuhua01234567 · 发表于 2012-3-3 16:15:02

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qiuhua01234567 · 发表于 2012-3-2 14:13:18

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qiuhua01234567 · 发表于 2012-3-2 14:13:08

As it is of 是多余本身没指定是什所以是WORDY或是REDUNDANT

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那么awkward呢？

acuratl88888 · 发表于 2012-3-2 00:24:09

As it is of 是多余本身没指定是什所以是WORDY或是REDUNDANT

acuratl88888 · 发表于 2012-3-1 23:57:01

句子本身不和逻辑. it 是讲什也没指定. 句子结构也错因为没有PARALLELL(平行).

qiuhua01234567 · 发表于 2012-3-1 21:36:21

OG12-9求助。。

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