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非NN来试下~偶然看到这个年代久远的帖子,不知还能不能帮上忙
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原句是:Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
可以看出加粗部分的主干表达的是“信被写了”,橙色部分作状语修饰信如何多。主语是letters。
前面baby姐贴的Ron解释里有说,
The "comma+ ing" modifier should only be used when:
(A)
it MODIFIES THE ENTIRE ACTION of the precedingclause, and it APPLIES TO THE SUBJECT of that clause;
(B)
one of the followingis true:
(1) the"ing" action is SIMULTANEOUS with, andSUBORDINATE to, the main action;
-i ran down the sidewalk, flapping my arms wildly(2) the"ing" action is a DIRECT AND IMMEDIATECONSEQUENCE of the main action.
-i got a 100 on the most recent exam, bringing my average up to 91
如果用原句的表达,“outnumbering her letters to anyone else”符合(A),但是(B)的1、2都不符合,即与主句动词并不是同时和从属关系,也不是直接的因果关系
再来看OA:
Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber her letters to anyoneelse.
这个选项表达ED写给SH的信比她写给其他人的都多,中间穿插橙色部分关于写信时间的修饰
把outnumber放在主干、写信时间作为修饰,能合逻辑
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