og 语法 88题中both的用法

Yyuan17

88.Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.


(A)Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B)Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer,produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C)Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk,who produced a body of work rooted
(D)Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
(E)Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
我选的E，我知道A中的both是错的，应是both rooted + v.-ed
但是E中的both是在rooted的之后，所以就是rooted在Willie与Duke两个方面啊
请问这样理解怎么不对了~~~~~
谢谢各位帮我解答~

Yyuan17

我觉得逻辑是一样的啊，D中的that was rooted就是来修饰work，而E中省略了 that was ，rooted依旧修饰work
就像og 68题一样，原句是 the first teachers that were cut into.....have yielded.....改成the first teachers cut into ....have....

michaelmay17

还是不懂啊，E和D的差别不就是E多了一个both吗？

-- by 会员 Yyuan17 (2012/1/28 1:59:29)

只多了both？that was也多出来了吧，看到that was先想到是不是主被动不同，再想到that was会不会wordy，还有，逻辑意思啊亲，逻辑意思改变了！T的作品，植根于。。。的传统和 T的作品植根于。。。和。。。。不是一个意思，从逻辑合理来看后一种是错的，也就是E。og上解释了。倒是这题没考，yet i many ways he...，这个暗示了前面是个句子，而且主语最好是he的所指。每个选项都很有内涵的哈lz

Yyuan17

还是不懂啊，E和D的差别不就是E多了一个both吗？

michaelmay17

谢谢，明白了~可是E中还有什么其他问题啊

-- by 会员 Yyuan17 (2012/1/28 1:40:21)

哈，不仅纯的语法问题要对，逻辑也要对啊亲~

Yyuan17

谢谢，明白了~可是E中还有什么其他问题啊

michaelmay17

both A and B 是要求A和B的成分对称的。E里前面的是 in the
stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith 是介词短语and 后面是 Duke Ellington是人名，也就是名词，不对称了，当然E还有其他错误，针对你的问题回答这么多。