【急】求助！！这个句子是否属于run-on句子！求解答，紧急求助！

caoyue1008 · 发表于 2012-1-18 20:45:25

she has a strong affinity to research and learning, excellent communication skills in both English and Chinese, and she has a rare natural ability at dealing logically with all kinds of situations and people, coordinate and organize and achieving the goals set for her, or her team.

米米时代007 · 发表于 2012-1-19 10:32:53

a rare ability前忘记加and了

米米时代007 · 发表于 2012-1-19 10:32:10

she has a strong affinity to research and learning, excellent communication skills in both English and Chinese, and she has a rare natural ability at dealing logically with all kinds of situations and people, coordinate and organize and achieving the goals set for her, or her team.

-- by 会员 caoyue1008 (2012/1/18 20:45:25)

我认为问题出在parallelism
She has a strong affinity to research and learning, excellent communication skills in both English and Chinese, a rare natural ability at dealing logically with all kinds of situations and people, coordinating, organizing, and achieving the goals set for her or her team. 我也不确定对不对，欢迎各位指点迷津~

映日飞烟 · 发表于 2012-1-19 00:43:48

run-on不是指无连词情况下，两个完整句子以逗号相连么。这句子有连词啊，为啥run-on？

michaelmay17 · 发表于 2012-1-18 23:25:19

我觉得不是，因为有逗号有and也给力主语，只不过错在这个主语多余了，欢迎讨论~

【急】求助！！这个句子是否属于run-on句子！求解答，紧急求助！

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