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楼主
发表于 2011-11-10 14:59:57 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
I love you you love me.  (run-on for sure)I love you, you love me. (run-on for sure)
I love you and you love me.(run-on?????????)
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-11-13 18:21:26 | 只看该作者
gmat明确要求,and连接两个句子的时候一定在and前要加逗号。
so...gmat认为:I love you, and you love me.才是对的

(不是我说的,manhattan说的)
-- by 会员 xingruiming (2011/11/12 10:00:09)



太谢谢你了~Manhattan确实牛x
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发表于 2011-11-12 10:00:09 | 只看该作者
gmat明确要求,and连接两个句子的时候一定在and前要加逗号。
so...gmat认为:I love you, and you love me.才是对的

(不是我说的,manhattan说的)
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-11-12 00:02:44 | 只看该作者
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-11-11 16:34:16 | 只看该作者
manhattan语法里定义run-on是A comma is not enough to join two main clauses. A sentence that violates this rule
is called a Run-on Sentence.

我觉得I love you and you love me不算run-on。
-- by 会员 yeah529 (2011/11/11 11:28:31)

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While HansHolbein the Younger is most often identified with his English portraits,scholars have

long beenrecognizing him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and whowas

fundamental insynthesizing the novelties of the Italian Renaissance with the rationaltradition of

NorthernEurope.          


(A) beenrecognizing him as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and who

(B) beenrecognizing him for being a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artistand he

(C) recognizedhim as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist who

(D) recognizedhim as a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and he

(E) recognizedhim for being a superb draftsman and a remarkably versatile artist and who  


A. As介宾短语后两个and出现,错误

B. For being adraftsman用法错误,应用asand he was fundamental…使该句的主句出现两套完

整的主谓,构成run-on错误

C.    正确。

D.    B选项,and he was…       构成run-on错误

E. For being adraftsman用法错误,应用asand who…中的and多余。


句子结构:While…, scholarshave long recognized him as…  

While引起的从句可译为尽管,表转折,as引导的介宾结构作主句谓语recognized的宾语补足语,其





as A and BA/B要求形式平行、内容对称。


动词形式(Verb Form,                                       平行对称(Parallelism, 习惯用语(Idiom, 句子结构(Grammatical

Construction

1) have recognized vs. have been recognizing过去完成时态与过去完成进行时态。

2) as引导的介宾结构,as A and BA/B要求形式平行、内容对称。原句中as结构后面出现了两个

连词and,一定是错误的。此处关于who从句的处理可以有两种方式:1

who理解为与draftsmanartist平行

在这种情况下as介宾短语的并列形式为:as a superb draftsman, a remarkable versatile

artist, and who was….  

who从句理解成artist的定语从句

此情况下,第二个and必须去掉,介宾结构变为:as a draftsman and an artist who was….

3) recognize somebody as somebody/something

4)        在一个单句当中,只能出现一套主谓结构。句子主语可以是多个人或物、谓语也可以是并列的多

个动词,比如: A, B and C are singing.                                        或者People come and go.    但是不能出现多套主谓关系,

: A sang and Bdanced.  当多套主谓在同一句子中出现时,需要适当的标点符号将其隔开,如:

A sang; B danced.  或者  A sang, and B danced.这样才是正确的句子。







this is the explanation of prep 07 sc, i wonder the validity of the explanation": A sang and B danced.  当多套主谓在同一句子中出现时,需要适当的标点符号将其隔开,"
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发表于 2011-11-11 11:28:31 | 只看该作者
manhattan语法里定义run-on是A comma is not enough to join two main clauses. A sentence that violates this rule
is called a Run-on Sentence.

我觉得I love you and you love me不算run-on。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2011-11-11 00:18:25 | 只看该作者
来个牛牛啊
板凳
发表于 2011-11-10 15:07:58 | 只看该作者
同问。。。。。
沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2011-11-10 15:00:22 | 只看该作者
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