求解两道平行题的矛盾 旧prep-56 与 旧prep-76

freyang

旧prep 56
First discovered more than 30 years ago, Lina's sunbird, a four-and-a-half-inch animal found in the Philippines and that resembles a hummingbird, has shimmering metallic colors on its head; a brilliant orange patch, bordered with red tufts, in the center of its breast; and a red eye.

(A) found in the Philippines and that resembles
(B) found in the Philippines and that, resembling
(C) found in the Philippines and resembling
(D) that is found in the Philippines and it resembles
(E) that is found in the Philippines and that, resembling
答案是C

旧prep-76
By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.

(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be

答案是B

我的疑惑是，Manhattan里面说：形容词，过去分词，现在分词是可以平行的，而第一题也证明了现在分词和过去分词平行，为什么第二题不能选A，found noise not continuous but consisted of ...平行？ 快考试了 麻烦各位牛牛帮我解答一下 谢谢谢谢啊

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freyang 发表于 2011-10-2 10:45
旧prep-76By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an o ...

我也犯了这个错误，困惑了好久，语法笔记没有解释清楚 consist 不存在被动表达。

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freyang

旧prep-76
By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.

(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be

by开始的句子，必须是要能够符合逻辑主语一致性的==>by doing sth, sb do sth
1. 因为句首是by recording，所以后面的划线内容就应该也是doing sth,而不是DE的结构，不符合平行的原则
2.在ABC的区别就是 the noise not/that the noise was not/the noise not to be, 到底用哪个就要看未划线的部分：continuous but consisted of ==>这里是svo but vo的结构，既然but后面是consisted of，是but did sth 的过去时的结构，所以but前面也必须有verb存在而AC都没有，B不但有verb(be动词），还很好的对应了过去时的结构was，所以B正确

-- by 会员 清飞扬 (2011/10/2 9:50:10)

Ou 不会点回复 再来一次
嗯嗯 明白 真是太感谢了 我看了你的回复之后找到了自己的一个错误点 就是把consisted 误用做了被动，以为是found the noise (is) continuous and found the noise (is) consisted of...
谢谢你啊！

freyang

嗯嗯 明白 真是太感谢了 我看了你的回复之后找到了自己的一个错误点 就是把consisted 误用做了被动，以为是found the noise (is) continuous and found the noise (is) consisted of...
谢谢你啊！

清飞扬

旧prep-76
By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.

(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be

by开始的句子，必须是要能够符合逻辑主语一致性的==>by doing sth, sb do sth
1. 因为句首是by recording，所以后面的划线内容就应该也是doing sth,而不是DE的结构，不符合平行的原则
2.在ABC的区别就是 the noise not/that the noise was not/the noise not to be, 到底用哪个就要看未划线的部分：continuous but consisted of ==>这里是svo but vo的结构，既然but后面是consisted of，是but did sth 的过去时的结构，所以but前面也必须有verb存在而AC都没有，B不但有verb(be动词），还很好的对应了过去时的结构was，所以B正确

清飞扬

旧prep 56
First discovered more than 30 years ago, Lina's sunbird, a four-and-a-half-inch animal found in the Philippines and that resembles a hummingbird, has shimmering metallic colors on its head; a brilliant orange patch, bordered with red tufts, in the center of its breast; and a red eye.

(A) found in the Philippines and that resembles
(B) found in the Philippines and that, resembling
(C) found in the Philippines and resembling
(D) that is found in the Philippines and it resembles
(E) that is found in the Philippines and that, resembling
答案是C

因为你没有真的吧平行结构给吃透了！不是光出现adj,adv等等就能够随便对应平行的

First discovered more than 30 years ago, Lina's sunbird, a four-and-a-half-inch animal found in the Philippines and that resembles a hummingbird, has shimmering metallic colors on its head; a brilliant orange patch, bordered with red tufts, in the center of its breast; and a red eye.

从句义上看这个划线部分应该是修饰前置词animal的，所以应该用that vo的结构或者（that) vo结构，
(A) found in the Philippines and that resembles==》所谓平行就是that要么同时出现，要么同时不存在，但是现在found这边that省略而resemble这边that是存在的，所以不平行
(B) found in the Philippines and that, resembling==》错误1.同上的一个that省略，一个存在 2. resembing变成了插入结构错误，而插入结构应该是修饰前置词的但是前面现在是and that，所以这个resembling毫无意义
(C) found in the Philippines and resembling==》正确，that都省略。that is found xxxx and that resembles==>都省略that就能变成C的结构
(D) that is found in the Philippines and it resembles==>这个句子结构错误，因为正确的句子结构必须是svo, and svo而现在这句是svo and svo，
(E) that is found in the Philippines and that, resembling==>两边都有that，可是犯了和B错误中第二点的问题